for Undertow8/16/2019 c1 
3Vulcan Rider
This was so great. I can actually see this conversation going on between Lula and Stephanie. I can see their expressions and I'm curious to know what all else is going on, and why Steph was feeling the way she was. This would be a great lead-in to a new story.
BTW, I absolutely LOVE The Little Recruit, and hope you will consider giving us more. So glad to see you back. We missed you.
Maggie M.
3Vulcan RiderThis was so great. I can actually see this conversation going on between Lula and Stephanie. I can see their expressions and I'm curious to know what all else is going on, and why Steph was feeling the way she was. This would be a great lead-in to a new story.
BTW, I absolutely LOVE The Little Recruit, and hope you will consider giving us more. So glad to see you back. We missed you.
Maggie M.
7/28/2019 c1 Donna
undertow
[ˈəndərˌtō]
NOUN
a current of water below the surface and moving in a different direction from any surface current.
"I was swept away by the undertow"
an implicit quality, emotion, or influence underlying the superficial aspects of something and leaving a particular impression.
"there's a dark undertow of loss that links the novel with earlier works"
Imagine my confusion when it turned out to be a new fangled term for coffee from a particular coffee house. Why does Steph need a distraction and why isn't she sleeping at night?
This is a good start. It needs, no Wants, more. Please, feed the story! Caffeine and cake are a great start.
undertow
[ˈəndərˌtō]
NOUN
a current of water below the surface and moving in a different direction from any surface current.
"I was swept away by the undertow"
an implicit quality, emotion, or influence underlying the superficial aspects of something and leaving a particular impression.
"there's a dark undertow of loss that links the novel with earlier works"
Imagine my confusion when it turned out to be a new fangled term for coffee from a particular coffee house. Why does Steph need a distraction and why isn't she sleeping at night?
This is a good start. It needs, no Wants, more. Please, feed the story! Caffeine and cake are a great start.
6/19/2019 c1 4HermioneIncarnate
I love this. Could def be a scene in a bigger story. You do a good job with the funny side of the characters.
4HermioneIncarnateI love this. Could def be a scene in a bigger story. You do a good job with the funny side of the characters.
6/10/2019 c1 JB
Thanks for the funny read this morning. Hope you are gettint back in the saddle with your muse. JB.
Thanks for the funny read this morning. Hope you are gettint back in the saddle with your muse. JB.
6/9/2019 c1 Guest
Cute
Cute
6/11/2019 c1 1jules3677
Had no clue what an undertow was either! Though I didn’t think it was Lula’s meaning, no matter what. Hopefully the muse is kickstarted now. :)
1jules3677Had no clue what an undertow was either! Though I didn’t think it was Lula’s meaning, no matter what. Hopefully the muse is kickstarted now. :)
6/9/2019 c1 Guest
lol. i didn't know what an undertow was either. lol
lol. i didn't know what an undertow was either. lol
6/10/2019 c1 GarbanzoBeans
Hmm could this be a little taste of more to come? Could be a start of something interesting.
Hmm could this be a little taste of more to come? Could be a start of something interesting.
6/10/2019 c1 77Manchester's Stubborn Pansy
at first I had no idea what you were even talking about but then I got the drift.
Thanks for the smiles this morning.
I think the story will be fun.
Martha
77Manchester's Stubborn Pansyat first I had no idea what you were even talking about but then I got the drift.
Thanks for the smiles this morning.
I think the story will be fun.
Martha