
7/12/2019 c29 Guest
This chapter is simply beautiful. Elizabeth is displaying a mature and wise faith, and that's not something we get to see often. Love her conclusions here. Bravo to you!
This chapter is simply beautiful. Elizabeth is displaying a mature and wise faith, and that's not something we get to see often. Love her conclusions here. Bravo to you!
7/11/2019 c28 Touched Heartie
Well done on this story, keep the chapters coming I look for more chapters, I still miss Jack in this story but you have written a good new beginning for Elizabeth and baby Jack.
Well done on this story, keep the chapters coming I look for more chapters, I still miss Jack in this story but you have written a good new beginning for Elizabeth and baby Jack.
7/10/2019 c28 Starkvb
This was a super good chapter! I loved it!
This was a super good chapter! I loved it!
7/10/2019 c28 jmlh
First of all, I only read J&E stories, and the fact that I am reviewing yours means that I enjoy your writing (well, this chapter had so much angst in it - it was a bit rough, but well done). I understand we have all kinds of writers and readers that love all the different aspects of the show, so it is very, very rare I venture into anything outside the J&E realm. That being said, I have been reading your story all along - mostly the day you post a new chapter or two or three. I wasn't sure at first, but your writing drew me in, the respect you have for the characters, and the integrity for the relationships you are building in your story. I am #NoTeamYet, and doubt I will ever be b/c the show is on a very different path now. Even though I am still heartbroken over Jack's death in the show, this story you have created is very good, capturing the nuances of how the characters would act, behave, and speak. I don't "see" Lucas and Fiona together; however, your chapters on them are really well done! You have me convinced - LOL! Thank you for sharing your talents.
First of all, I only read J&E stories, and the fact that I am reviewing yours means that I enjoy your writing (well, this chapter had so much angst in it - it was a bit rough, but well done). I understand we have all kinds of writers and readers that love all the different aspects of the show, so it is very, very rare I venture into anything outside the J&E realm. That being said, I have been reading your story all along - mostly the day you post a new chapter or two or three. I wasn't sure at first, but your writing drew me in, the respect you have for the characters, and the integrity for the relationships you are building in your story. I am #NoTeamYet, and doubt I will ever be b/c the show is on a very different path now. Even though I am still heartbroken over Jack's death in the show, this story you have created is very good, capturing the nuances of how the characters would act, behave, and speak. I don't "see" Lucas and Fiona together; however, your chapters on them are really well done! You have me convinced - LOL! Thank you for sharing your talents.
7/10/2019 c28 Guest
Meant to say “ .chapter!”
Meant to say “ .chapter!”
7/10/2019 c28 Guest
. .chapter! You took us for quite a ride!
Best line: Three of them. They were his heart. Please please update soon!
. .chapter! You took us for quite a ride!
Best line: Three of them. They were his heart. Please please update soon!
7/10/2019 c28 Guest
Wow, this chapter really pulled the heart strings! Allie was very brave. Great writing!
Wow, this chapter really pulled the heart strings! Allie was very brave. Great writing!
7/8/2019 c26 Guest
Ooooh, yeeees! A Coulter baby! :D
Ooooh, yeeees! A Coulter baby! :D
7/8/2019 c26 Guest
Oh my! What an emotional chapter! Love this! Please keep writing!
Oh my! What an emotional chapter! Love this! Please keep writing!
7/8/2019 c25 Guest
I check for new chapters everyday too! I thought I loved (still do) the Nathan/Allie scenes, but the Elizabeth/Allie scene really tug at my heart!
I check for new chapters everyday too! I thought I loved (still do) the Nathan/Allie scenes, but the Elizabeth/Allie scene really tug at my heart!
7/7/2019 c1 Guest
Rosemary not eating as much as normal...She better be pregnant!
Rosemary not eating as much as normal...She better be pregnant!
7/7/2019 c24 Guest
Sometimes Rosemary was just so...Rosemary.— my favorite line in this chapter! You are doing such a great job keeping the N/E tension going. Can’t wait to read more! Please please post soon! Thank you for such a great story!
Sometimes Rosemary was just so...Rosemary.— my favorite line in this chapter! You are doing such a great job keeping the N/E tension going. Can’t wait to read more! Please please post soon! Thank you for such a great story!
7/7/2019 c25
21elizabethB88
I am thoroughly enjoying your vision for season 7! Each chapter has such depth and a true knowledge of the characters. I really hope that this is the actual direction the next season takes, especially as regards Nathan/Elizabeth and Lucas/Fiona. You've inserted heart and humor in this story, and it's great! I check every day for new chapters! Thanks for this awesome story!

I am thoroughly enjoying your vision for season 7! Each chapter has such depth and a true knowledge of the characters. I really hope that this is the actual direction the next season takes, especially as regards Nathan/Elizabeth and Lucas/Fiona. You've inserted heart and humor in this story, and it's great! I check every day for new chapters! Thanks for this awesome story!
7/7/2019 c24 Guest
Love this chapter! You've got the characters down, Lee and Rosemary especially.
Love this chapter! You've got the characters down, Lee and Rosemary especially.