
6/25/2019 c5 Ybdavila
Such a moving chapter...sorry for the delay in writing a review. This one was heart wrenching...beautiful
Such a moving chapter...sorry for the delay in writing a review. This one was heart wrenching...beautiful
6/24/2019 c13 Guest
As someone suffering from infertility I want to thank you for writing an infertility/adoption story where everything doesn't just immediately and perfectly work out. It does so much more justice to the real pain and uncertainty onvolved.
As someone suffering from infertility I want to thank you for writing an infertility/adoption story where everything doesn't just immediately and perfectly work out. It does so much more justice to the real pain and uncertainty onvolved.
6/23/2019 c14 Guest
I loooooove! Elizabeth teaching Allie to bake! How sweet is that. Elizabeth has come a long way in the cooking department.
I loooooove! Elizabeth teaching Allie to bake! How sweet is that. Elizabeth has come a long way in the cooking department.
6/23/2019 c14 Susie Thornton
thanks
thanks
6/22/2019 c13 M
I don't even know what to say! I'm blown away with emotions! This is so beautiful and TRAGIC! You're an amazing writer! Keep up the incredible work!
I don't even know what to say! I'm blown away with emotions! This is so beautiful and TRAGIC! You're an amazing writer! Keep up the incredible work!
6/22/2019 c13 Guest
Oh my...all the feels! The previous chapter was so sweet and adorable, and this one made me ache for Lee and Rosemary. Excellent job!
Oh my...all the feels! The previous chapter was so sweet and adorable, and this one made me ache for Lee and Rosemary. Excellent job!
6/22/2019 c13 Guest
Oh my... what an emotional chapter! Again yiu did a magnificent job!
Oh my... what an emotional chapter! Again yiu did a magnificent job!
6/22/2019 c1 Guest
Ooooo... the sizzling tension between E&N!’ Need more chapters!
Ooooo... the sizzling tension between E&N!’ Need more chapters!
6/21/2019 c11 Guest
These two chapters are soooooo good! Tbe railing & the contest between Elizabeth and Nathan! Please tell me ch 12?is coming soon. Can’t wait to read more about Elizabeth and Nathan! Magnificent job you did!
These two chapters are soooooo good! Tbe railing & the contest between Elizabeth and Nathan! Please tell me ch 12?is coming soon. Can’t wait to read more about Elizabeth and Nathan! Magnificent job you did!
6/21/2019 c10 Starkvb
I love the way you write. It’s very similar to the show in having multiple storylines at once which I know that’s what you’re going for. I just wanted to let you know that you are doing a good job of that and I’m greatly enjoying your story!
I love the way you write. It’s very similar to the show in having multiple storylines at once which I know that’s what you’re going for. I just wanted to let you know that you are doing a good job of that and I’m greatly enjoying your story!
6/20/2019 c9
20elizabethB88
I think you are doing a great job! The whole story is engaging and fun to read. I happen to also be Team Nathan, so I'm fully on board with where this is going :) I'm also a fan of the idea of Lucas and Fiona, and am enjoying their interactions. Keep up the amazing writing!

I think you are doing a great job! The whole story is engaging and fun to read. I happen to also be Team Nathan, so I'm fully on board with where this is going :) I'm also a fan of the idea of Lucas and Fiona, and am enjoying their interactions. Keep up the amazing writing!
6/20/2019 c9 Guest
I absolutely love your story! Please keep writing! Can’t wait for the next chapters! Thank you!
I absolutely love your story! Please keep writing! Can’t wait for the next chapters! Thank you!
6/18/2019 c8 Maria
I read this chapter, squealing. Normally I don't review chapters, but I LOVED this chapter! I think I might know what those long Rosemary and Lee drives are for, and I LOVE Nathan and Elizabeth! You're a great writer! Keep doing what you're doing!
I read this chapter, squealing. Normally I don't review chapters, but I LOVED this chapter! I think I might know what those long Rosemary and Lee drives are for, and I LOVE Nathan and Elizabeth! You're a great writer! Keep doing what you're doing!
6/17/2019 c8 Guest
Oh my goodness! Thank you for this! I was the one wrote to say I couldn’t wait to read more Elizabeth-Nathan interactions! Now I want even more! What a sweet chapter... especially the end with Rosemary’s statement about having eyes! You have totally nailed Rosemary’s wit! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh my goodness! Thank you for this! I was the one wrote to say I couldn’t wait to read more Elizabeth-Nathan interactions! Now I want even more! What a sweet chapter... especially the end with Rosemary’s statement about having eyes! You have totally nailed Rosemary’s wit! Looking forward to the next chapter!