for Harry Potter and the Magical Guardian6/8/2022 c20 
5InuKailani
Okkk before I go any further I enjoy this story with good Dursleys and Harry having a positive support system. Yet also I need some kind of idea on the pairing, I added it because it looked like a well written Harmony story but it confuses me with it at times. Especially with this whole Tina thing even the few times she had some book time were the sections I had to skip entirely. Especially if both she and Ginny will be problems for Hermione going forward, but I’ll stick it out hopefully. Otherwise it’s very interes and I like the other relationships though your Dumbledore sort of confuses me I know how hard it is writing something original and I saw there was a book after this so in the words of Dory, “JUST KEEP SWIMMING!”
5InuKailaniOkkk before I go any further I enjoy this story with good Dursleys and Harry having a positive support system. Yet also I need some kind of idea on the pairing, I added it because it looked like a well written Harmony story but it confuses me with it at times. Especially with this whole Tina thing even the few times she had some book time were the sections I had to skip entirely. Especially if both she and Ginny will be problems for Hermione going forward, but I’ll stick it out hopefully. Otherwise it’s very interes and I like the other relationships though your Dumbledore sort of confuses me I know how hard it is writing something original and I saw there was a book after this so in the words of Dory, “JUST KEEP SWIMMING!”
5/28/2022 c43 3Steve-Arkarian
I enjoyed reading the story, and I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
I wonder if the child that Arthur spoke about needing help was Luna. I really hope it is, she's one of my favorite characters and I definitely would like to see her included in the story.
3Steve-ArkarianI enjoyed reading the story, and I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
I wonder if the child that Arthur spoke about needing help was Luna. I really hope it is, she's one of my favorite characters and I definitely would like to see her included in the story.
5/27/2022 c39 Steve-Arkarian
Dumbledore is a dick. But I guess that can happen when he thinks he's the only one that can know things. Ugh!
Dumbledore is a dick. But I guess that can happen when he thinks he's the only one that can know things. Ugh!
5/26/2022 c28 Steve-Arkarian
Why would it be up to Tina for her dad to come watch her practice? I understand that Petunia is her magical guardian, and Remus is the Potter Steward as well as Tina's tutor, but she's a little girl and he is her father regardless of the fact he doesn't have magic.
Why would it be up to Tina for her dad to come watch her practice? I understand that Petunia is her magical guardian, and Remus is the Potter Steward as well as Tina's tutor, but she's a little girl and he is her father regardless of the fact he doesn't have magic.
5/25/2022 c18 Steve-Arkarian
I'm confused. Maybe he's just acting, but the Dumbledore from this chapter in The Dumbledore from the beginning of the story are drastically different!
Why would he think putting up the wards would make the warming charm not work on baby Harry anymore? Didn't he say he put the wards up several days after dropping off Harry, or was that only the Blood Wards?
"The spell is meant to be cast on objects or non magical animals." Since becoming Harry's familiar led to Najash now having a magical core, can they really still be considered non-magical anymore? Also, Harry would have to use wandless magic to do this in the summer, so as not to be picked up by the Ministry's monitors, but they already discussed that the words do not let magic recharge. If Harry is casting this super impressive spell and doing it wandless every 3 days...
By the time the quidditch game occurs it's been a couple weeks since Remus and Petunia and all them showed up at the school... Remus had seemed to agree with Petunia's look about someone needing to talk to the Weasleys about Ron being ostracized, at least by them but there's also the issue of his siblings, has anything been done about that?
I'm confused. Maybe he's just acting, but the Dumbledore from this chapter in The Dumbledore from the beginning of the story are drastically different!
Why would he think putting up the wards would make the warming charm not work on baby Harry anymore? Didn't he say he put the wards up several days after dropping off Harry, or was that only the Blood Wards?
"The spell is meant to be cast on objects or non magical animals." Since becoming Harry's familiar led to Najash now having a magical core, can they really still be considered non-magical anymore? Also, Harry would have to use wandless magic to do this in the summer, so as not to be picked up by the Ministry's monitors, but they already discussed that the words do not let magic recharge. If Harry is casting this super impressive spell and doing it wandless every 3 days...
By the time the quidditch game occurs it's been a couple weeks since Remus and Petunia and all them showed up at the school... Remus had seemed to agree with Petunia's look about someone needing to talk to the Weasleys about Ron being ostracized, at least by them but there's also the issue of his siblings, has anything been done about that?
5/25/2022 c17 Steve-Arkarian
I'm sorry, but how did Remus not smell peter? He has werewolf senses even if they're dulled when he is not transformed, and he spent 7 years in close contact with Peter both transformed and untransformed. He should recognize his scent even if it's been 10-15-20 years.
I'm sorry, but how did Remus not smell peter? He has werewolf senses even if they're dulled when he is not transformed, and he spent 7 years in close contact with Peter both transformed and untransformed. He should recognize his scent even if it's been 10-15-20 years.
5/22/2022 c7 Steve-Arkarian
I actually didn't think that you were going to put Harry and Ravenclaw, I thought he would also end up being in Hufflepuff.
I actually didn't think that you were going to put Harry and Ravenclaw, I thought he would also end up being in Hufflepuff.
5/15/2022 c2 1Crusader Nightshade
u see, I'm interested in the story but it's not keeping my attention. don't get me wrong, your a good writing, but it's not my cup of tea.
1Crusader Nightshadeu see, I'm interested in the story but it's not keeping my attention. don't get me wrong, your a good writing, but it's not my cup of tea.
5/14/2022 c34 OrdinaryAvgGuy
This just occurred to me. If Sirius needed to be cleared by a mind healer after long-term exposure to dementors, shouldn't the same proof be required of those who were subject to some type of mind control (such as the Imperious curse) for a long period of time? BTW, excellent story.
This just occurred to me. If Sirius needed to be cleared by a mind healer after long-term exposure to dementors, shouldn't the same proof be required of those who were subject to some type of mind control (such as the Imperious curse) for a long period of time? BTW, excellent story.
4/26/2022 c13 Guest
This story has gotten very boring and repetitive, the way it is blindly following Canon.
There are so many butterflies here, yet once again we're just reading a direct copy of Canon.
Shake it up Author, be brave!
This story has gotten very boring and repetitive, the way it is blindly following Canon.
There are so many butterflies here, yet once again we're just reading a direct copy of Canon.
Shake it up Author, be brave!
4/16/2022 c43 1Deathtrooper900
Great story, I love the premise and l can’t wait for you to finish book 2!
1Deathtrooper900Great story, I love the premise and l can’t wait for you to finish book 2!
4/15/2022 c43 Last Harper
The last chapter ended oddly, not really a cliffy, just an "oh well I'm done".
The last chapter ended oddly, not really a cliffy, just an "oh well I'm done".
4/12/2022 c22 Last Harper
Just a question about the UK. Do they not use the Rod of Asclepius or the Caduceus in reference to the medical services?
Just a question about the UK. Do they not use the Rod of Asclepius or the Caduceus in reference to the medical services?
3/21/2022 c19 Primalparadox8
I'm out. This is really good in a lot of ways but the whole "dumbledore stole money and trashed propertys" only to see no problem with him casting God knows what on Harry and even getting him inside runic arrays is stupid beyond belief.
With Harry in array Albus could literally do ANYTHING to him yet he's already been proven to be as untrustworthy as possible and everyone involved allows this? They would ALL have to be clinically brain dead to do so. So I'm out, I put up with allowing a few spells while it was a medical emergency despite the impossibly of Harry, his friends and his family thinking that would be a good idea but putting Harry in arrays that no one but Albus understands? No way never happen, utterly suicidal behavior and no way in hell would any witness with anything but hate towards Harry alow it from someone not so trusted that they'd put their life in his hands.
I'm out. This is really good in a lot of ways but the whole "dumbledore stole money and trashed propertys" only to see no problem with him casting God knows what on Harry and even getting him inside runic arrays is stupid beyond belief.
With Harry in array Albus could literally do ANYTHING to him yet he's already been proven to be as untrustworthy as possible and everyone involved allows this? They would ALL have to be clinically brain dead to do so. So I'm out, I put up with allowing a few spells while it was a medical emergency despite the impossibly of Harry, his friends and his family thinking that would be a good idea but putting Harry in arrays that no one but Albus understands? No way never happen, utterly suicidal behavior and no way in hell would any witness with anything but hate towards Harry alow it from someone not so trusted that they'd put their life in his hands.