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12/30/2020 c1 1I love Priscilla
it takes toooooooo long
10/31/2020 c1 Bluzerker
That’s disappointing, I liked your writing and how formatted the pacing was. It’s too bad I guess, hope the author who adopted it can update it soon. It’s been awhile.
7/24/2020 c1 xionrabbit
Damn This site is pretty toxic if you can get bullied to the point of quitting. Now I know why no one writes RE:Zero fanfics. Because the community is total cancer.
5/10/2020 c1 Bitch
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5/5/2020 c1 JamesThatOneGuy
lol i was right YOU DO HAVE A RE ZERO SEXUAL FETISH. LMAO
5/5/2020 c1 1SSJ Subaru
"Don't lewd your characters" And don't put your phone next to mine.
5/5/2020 c1 7SSJ Red graffiti
Good luck with Your halo fic. And please don't lead your characters anymore.
4/26/2020 c5 Guest
All I have to say is wow. The imagery this gave me is beyond belief.
4/5/2020 c5 TomMaga
NICE FETISH YOU GOT THERE BRUH
4/5/2020 c5 JamesTheOneGuy
dear god no just no, enough with your re zero sexual fetish its very obvious you have one, I came here to read a crossover one punch man story not some lemony filled sex driven porn fic, especially this chapter, this was a giant facepalm personally with the constant lewd sexual stuff. Please focus on the story and less on the sex, sure some lemon is fine, but you have put so much in this story its getting hard to read now, also the characters personalities are odd especially genos.
3/29/2020 c5 Captain stag
okay no wtf, you're a good author but pls the lewd scene is ruining the plot
3/28/2020 c1 Captain stag
can't you guys stop insulting the author I think he's already have enough criticism
3/26/2020 c4 Guest
more sexual fantasies? Absolutely unnecessary, and unrealistic.
3/26/2020 c4 Guest
damn you focus too much on the times when saitama killed one monster that grew seaweed like hair and ate said hair and the other time he killed a wild animal and ate it, even saitama has standards compared to city rats and pets, and demi human hippos, i mean he only took the seaweed like hair, not the creatures human like body.
3/26/2020 c3 Guest
genos feels more like hes not the original character, and why the sexual fantasy bull crap, completely unnecessary, there are plenty of other sites for that.
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