for Svengali7/10/2019 c1 Guest
This story is fascinating and has great horror
This story is fascinating and has great horror
6/27/2019 c1 Kaos
Great work, Oswald
Great work, Oswald
6/20/2019 c1 Guest
Keep writing more fanfiction, and more oneshots too please! One of the best parts of your writing is the conclusive plots, but also the immersive quality to it, witch is perfect for short story format. Something that is really important for takeing characters we know and putting them in new personnas is makeing sure you put the right characters in the right position. Since you have no delusions about Sebastians true nature, honestly any situation you put them in is going to be great for character !
Keep writing more fanfiction, and more oneshots too please! One of the best parts of your writing is the conclusive plots, but also the immersive quality to it, witch is perfect for short story format. Something that is really important for takeing characters we know and putting them in new personnas is makeing sure you put the right characters in the right position. Since you have no delusions about Sebastians true nature, honestly any situation you put them in is going to be great for character !
6/19/2019 c1 I understand
The audience were murdered by Sebastian, he was manipulating her mind the whole time.
Amazing story, bro
The audience were murdered by Sebastian, he was manipulating her mind the whole time.
Amazing story, bro
6/19/2019 c1 Richard
AWESOME show of demonic power
AWESOME show of demonic power
6/19/2019 c1 Zoey Frenzie
Horror is my absolute #1 favorite genre, and you do it well.
Horror is my absolute #1 favorite genre, and you do it well.
6/18/2019 c1 ToxicCure
Excellent. More blood-curdling terror, please
Excellent. More blood-curdling terror, please
6/18/2019 c1 Thank you
Honestly anything you write is going to be thoroughly enjoyable. Good job on yet another riveting story! I love how the audience seems to change as if nobody really was there at all. Like they are figments of her imagination, but somehow, they seem to afford another source of tension to Anne. They exist, but when she is delirious like that, they also don't. This kind of illustrates how frivolous things like your reputation dont stop being concerns in the face of much bigger worries. It seems horribly illogical that Anne would refrain from running, just because of the audience, but it also makes sense when you consider just how rediculous we can be sometimes. And its great that Sebastian would understand this aspect of human nature. Kudos!
Honestly anything you write is going to be thoroughly enjoyable. Good job on yet another riveting story! I love how the audience seems to change as if nobody really was there at all. Like they are figments of her imagination, but somehow, they seem to afford another source of tension to Anne. They exist, but when she is delirious like that, they also don't. This kind of illustrates how frivolous things like your reputation dont stop being concerns in the face of much bigger worries. It seems horribly illogical that Anne would refrain from running, just because of the audience, but it also makes sense when you consider just how rediculous we can be sometimes. And its great that Sebastian would understand this aspect of human nature. Kudos!
6/18/2019 c1 Aleta Wolff
Credo, tenebroso! O que Sebby fez com a platéia? Ele devorou a alma de todo mundo?
Credo, tenebroso! O que Sebby fez com a platéia? Ele devorou a alma de todo mundo?
6/18/2019 c1 Mary
Absolutely terrifying! Nice!
Absolutely terrifying! Nice!