for A new saiyan in universe seven5/6 c1 Guest
Story became trash when you said that the mc is stronger than whis and beerus combined and he just so happened to remember him lol wow this is trash
Story became trash when you said that the mc is stronger than whis and beerus combined and he just so happened to remember him lol wow this is trash
1/11 c1 Guest
Story became garbage almost immediately because the MC is stronger than Beerus and Whis combined lol like what? Garbage story
Story became garbage almost immediately because the MC is stronger than Beerus and Whis combined lol like what? Garbage story
6/18/2021 c2 Guest
update
update
10/28/2019 c2 Guest
Just look them up on Dragon Ball wiki, dude!
Also, PLEASE when you have Loke and Kelvin fight, their fight should probably break apart even the Null Realm and blast away the Grand Priest when he attempts to form a barrier to protect Zeno and the Observers!
What do you think?
Just look them up on Dragon Ball wiki, dude!
Also, PLEASE when you have Loke and Kelvin fight, their fight should probably break apart even the Null Realm and blast away the Grand Priest when he attempts to form a barrier to protect Zeno and the Observers!
What do you think?
10/28/2019 c2 Guest
LOKE should win. They will both put up a HELL of a fight and maybe the Grand Priest won’t even be able to keep track of their movements. Also when LOKE wins, I think you should have Zeno be unable to erase Kelvin, just to show how powerful he is, and LOKe. Maybe after this, Loke or Kelvin could even fight the Grand Priest to a stalemate? What do you think?!
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE
LOKE should win. They will both put up a HELL of a fight and maybe the Grand Priest won’t even be able to keep track of their movements. Also when LOKE wins, I think you should have Zeno be unable to erase Kelvin, just to show how powerful he is, and LOKe. Maybe after this, Loke or Kelvin could even fight the Grand Priest to a stalemate? What do you think?!
PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE
10/28/2019 c2 Guest
This shows SO AWESOME! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE! I would LOVE TO SEE LOKE WIN THOUGH! BECAUSE WHEN UNIVERSE 6 IS ERASED, ZENO WILL REALIZE THAT KELVIN AND LOKE ARE TOO POWERFUL FOR HIM TO ERASE. please please hurrry
This shows SO AWESOME! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE! I would LOVE TO SEE LOKE WIN THOUGH! BECAUSE WHEN UNIVERSE 6 IS ERASED, ZENO WILL REALIZE THAT KELVIN AND LOKE ARE TOO POWERFUL FOR HIM TO ERASE. please please hurrry
10/28/2019 c2 Guest
PLEASE please continue! LOVE IT
PLEASE please continue! LOVE IT
6/30/2019 c2 Fermin gonzalez
Continue this chapter
Continue this chapter
6/28/2019 c2 Guest
Nice
Nice
6/27/2019 c2 Guest
Is Goku still going to obtain ultra instinct in this story it be great if he did then he could stand a chance against universe 6 strongest warrior
Is Goku still going to obtain ultra instinct in this story it be great if he did then he could stand a chance against universe 6 strongest warrior
6/24/2019 c1 Guest
Please update this story is quite interesting
Please update this story is quite interesting