for Harry Potter and the Friend with Benefits8/31/2020 c5 Mr.BrownOptometrist
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
7/10/2020 c5 
11thunderofdeath97
cuckold harry sucks, so does harry sharing his mates, girlfriends, wives, whatever it is you want to call them, not a fan
11thunderofdeath97cuckold harry sucks, so does harry sharing his mates, girlfriends, wives, whatever it is you want to call them, not a fan
7/10/2020 c2 thunderofdeath97
this is such shit, i thought it was going to be harry and the women he is with only, i didnt know he was going to be passing them around like party favours
this is such shit, i thought it was going to be harry and the women he is with only, i didnt know he was going to be passing them around like party favours
5/30/2020 c5 Tunganation
Excellent, another great chapter. Sure Lilith didn't play much of a role in this one, but I'm glad that the Umbridge plot is moving forward in the background. Meanwhile, seeing Hermione finally get what's cumming to her, was a lot of fun too. Sounds like there will be a spitroast in her future.
Excellent, another great chapter. Sure Lilith didn't play much of a role in this one, but I'm glad that the Umbridge plot is moving forward in the background. Meanwhile, seeing Hermione finally get what's cumming to her, was a lot of fun too. Sounds like there will be a spitroast in her future.
5/30/2020 c5 Guest
Firstly, this is not meant to be a negative review, just a statement of facts. So, please do not feel offended.
This is the most perverted story I came across. I hoped it would be like the story 'Beginning of a New Life' but so far it isn't.
I hope you have some explanation for why suddenly everybody turned into perverted sex addicts and hope that this will not be just some meaningless smut fic.
According to you, Hermione made that last scene for the sake of equality but that scene blew it up and heavily favors Ron.
Harry never saw Hermione completely naked, they did not have sex for hours and they did not sleep together.
Again I hope you have some explanation for it.
And last point, there might be 2 or 3 girls/women who has no shame but making this many female characters that way (something that is not that common in real life) lowers the quality of your story. I think it would be best if you kept the disgusting behaviour to the girls who were bitches in the cannon; like Pansy and Marietta, it suits them.
Stay safe.
Firstly, this is not meant to be a negative review, just a statement of facts. So, please do not feel offended.
This is the most perverted story I came across. I hoped it would be like the story 'Beginning of a New Life' but so far it isn't.
I hope you have some explanation for why suddenly everybody turned into perverted sex addicts and hope that this will not be just some meaningless smut fic.
According to you, Hermione made that last scene for the sake of equality but that scene blew it up and heavily favors Ron.
Harry never saw Hermione completely naked, they did not have sex for hours and they did not sleep together.
Again I hope you have some explanation for it.
And last point, there might be 2 or 3 girls/women who has no shame but making this many female characters that way (something that is not that common in real life) lowers the quality of your story. I think it would be best if you kept the disgusting behaviour to the girls who were bitches in the cannon; like Pansy and Marietta, it suits them.
Stay safe.
5/29/2020 c5 4Chaosbringer01
Good job with everything so far, and great build up with plot. Also wondering whats going with her and if it has to with that small missed spell after transfiguration
4Chaosbringer01Good job with everything so far, and great build up with plot. Also wondering whats going with her and if it has to with that small missed spell after transfiguration
5/29/2020 c5 Guest
This story has nothing to do with romance or family, you should change the story tags.
This story has nothing to do with romance or family, you should change the story tags.
5/29/2020 c5 Guest
This story has nothing to do with romance or family, you should change the story tags.
This story has nothing to do with romance or family, you should change the story tags.
5/29/2020 c5 Guest
Don't like that you've turned Harry into a cuckold/swinger who likes to watch others have sex with girls he's been with, or that you turned Hermione into such a cockhungry slut.
Don't like partner sharing, am only interested in seeing her with Harry... or maybe other girls together with Harry, NOT any other guys.
also, "sounding almost like Dean's first grunt as he drove home"
This sounds pretty gay, and really ruins the scene.
Don't like that you've turned Harry into a cuckold/swinger who likes to watch others have sex with girls he's been with, or that you turned Hermione into such a cockhungry slut.
Don't like partner sharing, am only interested in seeing her with Harry... or maybe other girls together with Harry, NOT any other guys.
also, "sounding almost like Dean's first grunt as he drove home"
This sounds pretty gay, and really ruins the scene.
5/29/2020 c5 typo
venemous - venomous
venemous - venomous
5/12/2020 c4 Tunganation
I am not one to write a lot of reviews, but I'd certainly like to encourage you to keep writing and posting this story. When it started it seemed like pure smut fantasy, with a really good original character in Lilith, but little else. Each chapter has built a little more of your new Hogwarts. The smut is quite good too. It was this chapter though, that sucked me into the building plot. I now really wish to see where the building plot against Umbridge and what happens with Daphne and Pansy going forward. Thank you for writing, I'll keep reading.
I am not one to write a lot of reviews, but I'd certainly like to encourage you to keep writing and posting this story. When it started it seemed like pure smut fantasy, with a really good original character in Lilith, but little else. Each chapter has built a little more of your new Hogwarts. The smut is quite good too. It was this chapter though, that sucked me into the building plot. I now really wish to see where the building plot against Umbridge and what happens with Daphne and Pansy going forward. Thank you for writing, I'll keep reading.
4/28/2020 c4 Guest
Please, for the future chapters, if you plan to make Harry share good primary and secondary characters with someone else then at least make it so that Harry is the girls first in every erotic/sexual act.
Why; because Harry is the one who is continuously abused or in life threatening danger all the time.
Please, for the future chapters, if you plan to make Harry share good primary and secondary characters with someone else then at least make it so that Harry is the girls first in every erotic/sexual act.
Why; because Harry is the one who is continuously abused or in life threatening danger all the time.
4/28/2020 c4 Guest
You mistake dowry with bride price. I understand what you wanted to say but for the future they are like this.
Dowry is woman's responsibility and it not always money. It can be land or furniture or something else too. High dowry is good for the groom.
Bride price is a sum of money or goods given to the bride's family by the groom's family. High bride price is bad for the groom.
You mistake dowry with bride price. I understand what you wanted to say but for the future they are like this.
Dowry is woman's responsibility and it not always money. It can be land or furniture or something else too. High dowry is good for the groom.
Bride price is a sum of money or goods given to the bride's family by the groom's family. High bride price is bad for the groom.