for Harry Potter Football11/1/2021 c6 pointer31091
"Drowning in a boating accident when he was in his 70's"
Should have studied a bit more.
lol
"Drowning in a boating accident when he was in his 70's"
Should have studied a bit more.
lol
10/21/2021 c6 majere4
While rather low-key, the discussions and results with Sirius couldn't have worked out better. For Harry and Sirius, that is :D
... huh.
Well, I guess 'happy ending' is relative. Did Harry and Hermione stay friends? Did Harry marry? Have kids? Did he enjoy his life? It's sad that you spent so very much time leading up to a single paragraph for two characters epilogue, only the scarcest of details between them.
While rather low-key, the discussions and results with Sirius couldn't have worked out better. For Harry and Sirius, that is :D
... huh.
Well, I guess 'happy ending' is relative. Did Harry and Hermione stay friends? Did Harry marry? Have kids? Did he enjoy his life? It's sad that you spent so very much time leading up to a single paragraph for two characters epilogue, only the scarcest of details between them.
10/21/2021 c5 majere4
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Why Lily Evans was among them at least until the talk he had with her when she was being considered for Head Girl. Once he'd explained the difference in opportunities available to Mrs. James Potter, Wife of the head of House Potter as opposed to those available to muggle-born Lily Evans he noticed she was more receptive to James's advances.
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The fuck you say! So... you're saying Lily was a whore?
Wow, super quick turnaround on the basilisk. I am hopeful that Sirius will prove to be a serious pain in dld's backside!
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Why Lily Evans was among them at least until the talk he had with her when she was being considered for Head Girl. Once he'd explained the difference in opportunities available to Mrs. James Potter, Wife of the head of House Potter as opposed to those available to muggle-born Lily Evans he noticed she was more receptive to James's advances.
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The fuck you say! So... you're saying Lily was a whore?
Wow, super quick turnaround on the basilisk. I am hopeful that Sirius will prove to be a serious pain in dld's backside!
10/21/2021 c4 majere4
Moving forward at a good pace, though I'm not sure what would hold Dean back once he saw the opportunity that Harry showed was possible.
Moving forward at a good pace, though I'm not sure what would hold Dean back once he saw the opportunity that Harry showed was possible.
10/21/2021 c3 majere4
Holy crap, this is crazy! Very entertaining, but crazy!
Sadly, everything that is happening is pretty much reasonable given the insanity of the magical world.
Also (sadly?) you portray dark lord dumbles quite well. The manipulative old bastard that JKR had twinkle his way past his very real dark actions is exposed here.
Holy crap, this is crazy! Very entertaining, but crazy!
Sadly, everything that is happening is pretty much reasonable given the insanity of the magical world.
Also (sadly?) you portray dark lord dumbles quite well. The manipulative old bastard that JKR had twinkle his way past his very real dark actions is exposed here.
10/21/2021 c2 majere4
I'm smiling so broadly right now, you went above and beyond with McG and the RBW, so very intensely cool!
Wow, this got intense and really involved, nicely done! Still loving your McG!
I'm smiling so broadly right now, you went above and beyond with McG and the RBW, so very intensely cool!
Wow, this got intense and really involved, nicely done! Still loving your McG!
10/21/2021 c1 majere4
I really enjoy the flow of your stories. Logical, thoughtful, and detailed, it's easy to settle into your tales and look forward to some good in Harry's life. The only thing missing so far in this one is an enduring consequence for their actions.
I really enjoy the flow of your stories. Logical, thoughtful, and detailed, it's easy to settle into your tales and look forward to some good in Harry's life. The only thing missing so far in this one is an enduring consequence for their actions.
7/6/2021 c2 
2mrneb
Clever story idea! But why is Harry a goalkeeper? He's not really a good physical type for that position imo. He's small and fast and would be a decent winger at the very least.
2mrnebClever story idea! But why is Harry a goalkeeper? He's not really a good physical type for that position imo. He's small and fast and would be a decent winger at the very least.
9/2/2020 c6 10Lord Cartwright
Loved it, so different to other stories and I'd been looking for a football playing Harry for ages that wasn't abandoned.
10Lord CartwrightLoved it, so different to other stories and I'd been looking for a football playing Harry for ages that wasn't abandoned.
8/6/2020 c6 1dum as a door
good story just want to point out its not like Hermione or anyone not to use magic if they could magic could make to many things easier
1dum as a doorgood story just want to point out its not like Hermione or anyone not to use magic if they could magic could make to many things easier
1/1/2020 c1 BelleHart
Loved your story, especially Nicholas Angel but where’s Danny Butterman?
Glad to see Harry with a real family and choosing his own path in life.
Thanks.
Loved your story, especially Nicholas Angel but where’s Danny Butterman?
Glad to see Harry with a real family and choosing his own path in life.
Thanks.