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25Miriam1
This was an interesting story. Dumbledore was thwarted by law, logic, and luck at every turn.
This was a fun rendition of what would happen if someone responsible took charge of Harry.
Nicely done!
Sincerely,
Miriam

This was an interesting story. Dumbledore was thwarted by law, logic, and luck at every turn.
This was a fun rendition of what would happen if someone responsible took charge of Harry.
Nicely done!
Sincerely,
Miriam
6/20/2019 c6 RonRR
I was surprised to see Moody die from the goblet, was really expecting it to be Dumbledore after the suggestion that he was going to frame Karkaroff for it. Guess he got lucky and Voldemort's slip came out instead of Dumbledore's.
An interesting and different take on Harry's story.
Thank you for writing,
Ron
I was surprised to see Moody die from the goblet, was really expecting it to be Dumbledore after the suggestion that he was going to frame Karkaroff for it. Guess he got lucky and Voldemort's slip came out instead of Dumbledore's.
An interesting and different take on Harry's story.
Thank you for writing,
Ron
6/20/2019 c6 kimjo2
Well, I was hoping they would get together but still a highly intriguing story. Thanks!
Well, I was hoping they would get together but still a highly intriguing story. Thanks!
6/20/2019 c6 rowenasheir
So HP, goalkeeper "died" and did the Hermione route or did he actually DIE as in buried!
So HP, goalkeeper "died" and did the Hermione route or did he actually DIE as in buried!
6/20/2019 c1 Cassandra30
Awesome idea for a story! Love the Dursleys getting their comeuppance. Wish it had been more. Dumbledore is stupid, arrogant ass.
Awesome idea for a story! Love the Dursleys getting their comeuppance. Wish it had been more. Dumbledore is stupid, arrogant ass.
6/20/2019 c6
4hemotem
WOW! A Great read. One that is not a rewrite of something else I have read before, and I thank you for that. It is hard for me to find a story that is new that is not a copy and paste of something else done just a little different. So I take my hat off and say thank you very much for a great read and look forward to seeing more of your work.

WOW! A Great read. One that is not a rewrite of something else I have read before, and I thank you for that. It is hard for me to find a story that is new that is not a copy and paste of something else done just a little different. So I take my hat off and say thank you very much for a great read and look forward to seeing more of your work.
6/20/2019 c6 sparky40sw
very enjoyable story
thanks for an original fix to some serious holes in canon in the 1st 4 books.
warmest regards
very enjoyable story
thanks for an original fix to some serious holes in canon in the 1st 4 books.
warmest regards