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4/3 c1 Ishaan Kharia
This meeting between Lupin and Tonks puts into perspective how… weird their cannon relationship was.
3/16 c25 AndySerri
the story does have some nice character interactions, I'm just hoping for some action, there has been like zero so far
3/16 c24 AndySerri
what a lackluster way of dealing with Malfoy, extremely unsatisfying
3/16 c23 AndySerri
It's starting to get on my nerves how you never want the chatacters to retaliate against Malfoy, I'm 2/3rds in and all they've done is avoid avoid avoid
3/16 c15 AndySerri
Man, this story just tries to avoid confrontation as much as possible huh? Just people coming out of nowhere to interrupt and everything. Aggravating.
3/16 c3 AndySerri
Andromeda really had so many options she could have chosen before telling Dumbledore where the house was ._.
2/5 c4 teaman1
Why do Sirius not know Harry has ahorcruxes in hs head? After all a check up should reveal it?
2/3 c34 97Tsuruga Lia1412
Me encanta tu forma de escribir.
2/2 c17 Tsuruga Lia1412
Lo que le paso a Blaise es similar a lo que le pasó a Harry?
1/10 c1 Morheart
all looking good so far lets continue this journey
12/23/2024 c9 Ni8ki
An absolute perfect chapter, I suggest that everyone reads this brilliant fanfic!
12/23/2024 c6 Ni8ki
The banter in this fanfic is 10/10! Most writers can‘t write a proper dialogue without it being boring, cringe or dramatic. It just flows
12/23/2024 c4 Ni8ki
I can already tell that this is a banger fanfic! My favorite Haphne story (at least these chapters) I‘ve never commented before but this is just SO well written and thought out!
11/17/2024 c14 MRGwrites
I'm a short guy and i can definitively say not many women are as tall as i am or all that close really.
11/17/2024 c9 MRGwrites
I don't understand why people do the POV title thing, but you are quite good at making it obvious who's perspective we are reading which makes it doubly unnecessary just my 2 pence
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