for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero Returns9/22/2022 c17 NaaBe
How even with all the love and caring does Harry turn into this caring for the greater good, too harsh on himself guy. I understand the character development in this, and there are reasons, but still it feels crazy to read this :)
How even with all the love and caring does Harry turn into this caring for the greater good, too harsh on himself guy. I understand the character development in this, and there are reasons, but still it feels crazy to read this :)
9/22/2022 c9 NaaBe
Bird into water goblet transfiguration (inanimate to animate) - was it in 1st year syllabus in cannon? Seems to be too big compared to matchstick to needle. It must be important to the story but seems tough for 1st years.
Bird into water goblet transfiguration (inanimate to animate) - was it in 1st year syllabus in cannon? Seems to be too big compared to matchstick to needle. It must be important to the story but seems tough for 1st years.
9/22/2022 c3 NaaBe
Urgh... Although I am skeptical about the incoming manipulations, I am however excited to see how the story turns out. It is well written upto this stage :)
Urgh... Although I am skeptical about the incoming manipulations, I am however excited to see how the story turns out. It is well written upto this stage :)
9/22/2022 c2 NaaBe
Oh man, I hope Dumbles doesnt come in and have everyone dancing to his tune suddenly. And if it is him visiting here, it would be very strange to bring him right into their home where the Fidelius is, why not meet in a random location. But I guess that is how the story evolves.
Oh man, I hope Dumbles doesnt come in and have everyone dancing to his tune suddenly. And if it is him visiting here, it would be very strange to bring him right into their home where the Fidelius is, why not meet in a random location. But I guess that is how the story evolves.
9/20/2022 c17 thedarkwolf95
I don't think you know anything about Dementors other than a brief explanation you must've got from the IMDB plot summary. Dementors first suck the joy and Happiness from a person, then the Soul, if the process is interrupted the soul returns to the body, we see this and read it with Sirius in Prisoner of Azkaban. There is no way for the soul to leave the body and get lost "Roaming" around the world, its either eaten by the Dementor or restored to the body, there is no inbetween
I don't think you know anything about Dementors other than a brief explanation you must've got from the IMDB plot summary. Dementors first suck the joy and Happiness from a person, then the Soul, if the process is interrupted the soul returns to the body, we see this and read it with Sirius in Prisoner of Azkaban. There is no way for the soul to leave the body and get lost "Roaming" around the world, its either eaten by the Dementor or restored to the body, there is no inbetween
9/20/2022 c10 thedarkwolf95
So why is Sirius considered a criminal here, he had no trial, and he didn't get framed by Pettigrew for the death of 12 muggles and Pettigrew, also he didn't escape from Azkaban so no need for Dementors
So why is Sirius considered a criminal here, he had no trial, and he didn't get framed by Pettigrew for the death of 12 muggles and Pettigrew, also he didn't escape from Azkaban so no need for Dementors
9/19/2022 c4 thedarkwolf95
Harry without Hedwig is not Harry, don't know who this is but he seems like a soulless, cheap knockoff. Disney would be proud
Harry without Hedwig is not Harry, don't know who this is but he seems like a soulless, cheap knockoff. Disney would be proud
9/14/2022 c21 Shinki
WOW!
Embarassing Dracula and Lucifer and freeing Dobby and getting a book in one shot!
What a treat!
WOW!
Embarassing Dracula and Lucifer and freeing Dobby and getting a book in one shot!
What a treat!
9/14/2022 c3 The8thMarauder
Writing is horrible clearly done by someone with very limited knowledge of the harry potter world and lots of daydreaming what they saw in the movies. Try a different universe as you really suck at this. I skipped a chapter just so i can post this. Yes a dragon scale is more powerful for a wand core than a dragon heartstring. Why even bother writing? And yes Dumbledore overhears the gaunts speaking in parseltounge and somehow manages to recreate those ‘sounds’ and it just so happens to be the word ‘open’. And you wrote more than one story? Honestly get a different hobby.
Writing is horrible clearly done by someone with very limited knowledge of the harry potter world and lots of daydreaming what they saw in the movies. Try a different universe as you really suck at this. I skipped a chapter just so i can post this. Yes a dragon scale is more powerful for a wand core than a dragon heartstring. Why even bother writing? And yes Dumbledore overhears the gaunts speaking in parseltounge and somehow manages to recreate those ‘sounds’ and it just so happens to be the word ‘open’. And you wrote more than one story? Honestly get a different hobby.
9/12/2022 c30 JuliusCorvinus
getting love potion sweets sounds like the opening for a prank: just switch them up and return to sender. make them all fall in love with each other.
getting love potion sweets sounds like the opening for a prank: just switch them up and return to sender. make them all fall in love with each other.
9/9/2022 c9 JuliusCorvinus
bird into water goblet transfiguration? sounds extremely advanced for first year.
bird into water goblet transfiguration? sounds extremely advanced for first year.