for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero Returns
216/6/2024 c15 Mr.Fluppy
Hope you take Astoria's suggestions and have harry goes with another girl to have Daphne pissed
Hope you take Astoria's suggestions and have harry goes with another girl to have Daphne pissed
6/5/2024 c12 Mr.Fluppy
Is it wrong that I want to enter your fanfic and just *made a gesture of strangling someone*
Is it wrong that I want to enter your fanfic and just *made a gesture of strangling someone*
6/4/2024 c6 Mr.Fluppy
Hmmm, I kinda see you gonna put Astoria in Gryffindor because her dialogue says "she's gonna lived her remaining life without regret" and her facing down her blood curse with a brave front is a massive foreshadowing, then again, fanonically speaking, Astoria is a bubbly and energetic kid which is why in most daphrry fics with Astoria in it, she always ends up in Gryffindor or ravenclaw
Hmmm, I kinda see you gonna put Astoria in Gryffindor because her dialogue says "she's gonna lived her remaining life without regret" and her facing down her blood curse with a brave front is a massive foreshadowing, then again, fanonically speaking, Astoria is a bubbly and energetic kid which is why in most daphrry fics with Astoria in it, she always ends up in Gryffindor or ravenclaw
5/20/2024 c34 Alif Aain
I really enjoyed this story. Very nicely written. I quite enjoyed Harry and Daphne as a ccouple and absolutely love the golden trio of this book. The only thing that I disnt like was where was Harry BLACK!? There were no real Harry and Sirius scenes. They hardly had any interactions. There was no emotional moment between them when Harry was in the hospital wing both times. I was looking forward to all that. I hope to see it in the second book.
I really enjoyed this story. Very nicely written. I quite enjoyed Harry and Daphne as a ccouple and absolutely love the golden trio of this book. The only thing that I disnt like was where was Harry BLACK!? There were no real Harry and Sirius scenes. They hardly had any interactions. There was no emotional moment between them when Harry was in the hospital wing both times. I was looking forward to all that. I hope to see it in the second book.
5/20/2024 c32 Alif Aain
The ONLY thing i dont like about this story is the lack of Sirius and Harry interaction. They never spend any time together. What is this… long distance family relationship?
The ONLY thing i dont like about this story is the lack of Sirius and Harry interaction. They never spend any time together. What is this… long distance family relationship?
5/20/2024 c30 Alif Aain
I love this golden trio! One of the original GT was a jealous and insecure friend who always felt he was overshadowed, the other was an insufferable know-it-all who had no regard for others’ privacy. Ron always abandoned Harry when he needed him the most till he got his act together. Hermione seemed to take ALL the credit for Harry’s achievements. Michael is training harder so that he’s not dead weight when it comes down to fighting and Nev is just brilliant.
I love this golden trio! One of the original GT was a jealous and insecure friend who always felt he was overshadowed, the other was an insufferable know-it-all who had no regard for others’ privacy. Ron always abandoned Harry when he needed him the most till he got his act together. Hermione seemed to take ALL the credit for Harry’s achievements. Michael is training harder so that he’s not dead weight when it comes down to fighting and Nev is just brilliant.
5/19/2024 c22 Alif Aain
THIS is what i intensely hate about Hermione… she just has to “figure” out others’ business. You’d think knowing that Daphne wasnt studying Ancient Runes would be enough for her, but no! She has to butt into others’ business which doesnt concern her at all. Its so disrespectful and irritatingly annoying that she totally disregards other peoples’ privacy and poke her nose in EVERYWHERE!
THIS is what i intensely hate about Hermione… she just has to “figure” out others’ business. You’d think knowing that Daphne wasnt studying Ancient Runes would be enough for her, but no! She has to butt into others’ business which doesnt concern her at all. Its so disrespectful and irritatingly annoying that she totally disregards other peoples’ privacy and poke her nose in EVERYWHERE!
5/17/2024 c10 Alif Aain
Love how Michael is more supportive of Harry than Ron EVER was. He was ALWAYS jealous and throwing tantrums before getting his act together to be the “best friend.”
Love how Michael is more supportive of Harry than Ron EVER was. He was ALWAYS jealous and throwing tantrums before getting his act together to be the “best friend.”
5/1/2024 c31 csheila
Loved it
It’s wrong that Daphne didnt get the credit. But it’s more important that Blaise returns
Loved it
It’s wrong that Daphne didnt get the credit. But it’s more important that Blaise returns
5/1/2024 c30 csheila
God, Dumbles is a manipulative bastard. But he’s ignoring that he must get past Daphne
God, Dumbles is a manipulative bastard. But he’s ignoring that he must get past Daphne