for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero Returns5/1/2024 c29 csheila
Loved it
I like Em
Sue is entitled.
Too late to “ask,” but i hope you work Luna into the story
Loved it
I like Em
Sue is entitled.
Too late to “ask,” but i hope you work Luna into the story
5/1/2024 c27 csheila
It was fine. The chapter captured the illegal and dysfunctional government quir well
It was fine. The chapter captured the illegal and dysfunctional government quir well
5/1/2024 c25 csheila
Good job, even with Ron
I don’t care that Draco is broken. He’s too far out of control
Good job, even with Ron
I don’t care that Draco is broken. He’s too far out of control
5/1/2024 c24 csheila
Oh that’s good. Really good
At this point don’t worry what JKR says post novels.
Oh that’s good. Really good
At this point don’t worry what JKR says post novels.
4/30/2024 c15 csheila
Sweet how Harry would not force. Despite Padfoot raising him he’s not a dick like the Marauders. But i hope Astoria doesnt set him up
Sweet how Harry would not force. Despite Padfoot raising him he’s not a dick like the Marauders. But i hope Astoria doesnt set him up
4/30/2024 c13 csheila
Realistic take on Harry’s emotions and limitations.
Gotta think Malfoy will attack one of the sisters. Maybe Harry finds about the iolness
Realistic take on Harry’s emotions and limitations.
Gotta think Malfoy will attack one of the sisters. Maybe Harry finds about the iolness
4/30/2024 c12 csheila
I loved it
I hope in you story when Albus inevitably crosses the line he gets smashed
I loved it
I hope in you story when Albus inevitably crosses the line he gets smashed