Just In
for Isolation

6/25/2019 c1 xxxxSxAxxxx
Pppplllleeeaaasseeee continues this! Don’t make it a one shot!
6/24/2019 c1 9Zoggerific
Okay, a decent one-shot with good pacing and dialogue throughout.

There are a couple of missing punctuation marks and a couple where there shouldn't be any like "Five, ".

This story would be better still if you expanded upon the story if you could expand upon the story and elaborate on what is physically or mentally wrong with Sonic other than his desire to isolate himself.

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