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1/14 c15 Shifter
Really great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter
11/26/2020 c15 TigrezzTail
This story has been really fascinating. So creative. I was initially worried about characters being OP but you've made it so that it doesn't make them all powerful immediately. I especially like when characters can grow not just in themselves but in their powers and prowess. Makes things much more interesting. and hooray for Karin getting a better life. I loved how she ditched her team of ingrates.
11/18/2020 c15 Danny Williams
Very good story with plenty of action and some humor.
Like that Naruto has family again.
Naruto is powerful but not a busy body.
Story could use some romance/sex (maybe his cousin or Hinata).
10/28/2020 c15 Evil-Bastard
Two Rivers eh? Wheel of Time fan? Will we be seeing women tugging on their braids?
10/26/2020 c15 Shifter
Great chapter and story as always please continue as soon as possible
10/26/2020 c15 Darkestcalling
Such a great story so far a few things I can truly complain about only glaring one would be how you seem to do your flash back / jumping forward creates a sorta disconnect feeling in the chapters I don't know how to exactly explain it other then that but otherwise I'm loving it please keep up the good work and if possible please don't drop it
10/26/2020 c15 AshBladeHentai
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job
9/15/2020 c1 Antianti12
Stopped right when the villagers were trying to lynch him, such a dumb cliche.
8/10/2020 c14 Percy Jackson7
Wow what a fight! And the new blade, I don't blame him not wanting to use it all the time. Blade that you don't want people knowing about. That's for sure.
8/6/2020 c14 Shifter
Really great story continue as soon as possible please and have Naruto gain a summoning contract soon along with the eternal mangekyou sharingan and then eventually rinnegan
8/2/2020 c14 Shifter
Great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter
7/23/2020 c13 biob1
Good work
7/23/2020 c12 biob1
If anyone says anything about him using vmclones just ignore them
7/15/2020 c13 Shifter
Really great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter
7/16/2020 c13 Immortal Potatoe
Epic story. Well written. Good job
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