for Human (Rewrite V2) NEW REWRITE POSTED ON 01-02-249/9/2023 c17 Vita Fortuna
To be honest i wouldnt give an excuse. They should say they are dating and that is non of they dont have to know.
Also i like this story i know its a side project but pls continue it.
Also this human changing thing a bit strange. Of course if it turns out that tha Swan family have tje shapeshifter gene and thats why she got this power than its beliveble. Also i dont know if she has blood, she wold have the newborn strenght forever?
To be honest i wouldnt give an excuse. They should say they are dating and that is non of they dont have to know.
Also i like this story i know its a side project but pls continue it.
Also this human changing thing a bit strange. Of course if it turns out that tha Swan family have tje shapeshifter gene and thats why she got this power than its beliveble. Also i dont know if she has blood, she wold have the newborn strenght forever?
8/17/2023 c17 
24FlowerChild23
You definitely need to keep going. This is really good. I would love to see what happens when she meets James again. IDK if you mentioned it but Edward needs to warn her about the wolf pack and the treaty. I would love to see her meet the Voltari one day and we still need the Denali clan to come.
24FlowerChild23You definitely need to keep going. This is really good. I would love to see what happens when she meets James again. IDK if you mentioned it but Edward needs to warn her about the wolf pack and the treaty. I would love to see her meet the Voltari one day and we still need the Denali clan to come.
8/6/2023 c7 3Guddu tales
Honestly ur story had so much potential but ur OC is literally the carbon copy of Bella, shallow, her character dry as fudge, pooking her nose in another persons buisness. its literally all rhe same.
3Guddu talesHonestly ur story had so much potential but ur OC is literally the carbon copy of Bella, shallow, her character dry as fudge, pooking her nose in another persons buisness. its literally all rhe same.
6/4/2023 c17 Daydreamer003
Im so glad that i found this story. I love the idea and cant wait to to read more.
Im so glad that i found this story. I love the idea and cant wait to to read more.
5/26/2023 c17 Guest
Just found this story. So entertaining and fun. I really hope you keep it up. Thanks for sharing. Great characters and lovely to see Bella and Jacob having maybe a shot
Just found this story. So entertaining and fun. I really hope you keep it up. Thanks for sharing. Great characters and lovely to see Bella and Jacob having maybe a shot
5/25/2023 c17 JovemDeElite
Hi, I'm glad you didn't completely give up on the story, I know what it's like to try to force yourself when the only thing you want to do is restart everything, so I've followed your user here and I'm waiting to start the new one!
Hi, I'm glad you didn't completely give up on the story, I know what it's like to try to force yourself when the only thing you want to do is restart everything, so I've followed your user here and I'm waiting to start the new one!
8/6/2022 c16 Guest
Thank you for sharing! I hope you update soon~!
Thank you for sharing! I hope you update soon~!
3/14/2022 c16 acd2016
This is so fantastic! Addison is a great protagonist! I can't wait to see what you write next for your story!
This is so fantastic! Addison is a great protagonist! I can't wait to see what you write next for your story!
9/29/2021 c8 Guest
Gross to her saying maybe to that guy
Gross to her saying maybe to that guy
11/14/2020 c16 Martha
Yay, your back! So excited to see updates on this story I love the whole idea :)
Yay, your back! So excited to see updates on this story I love the whole idea :)
11/10/2020 c16 9time-twilight
I hope Addison doesn't let Alice walk all over her like Bella did in canon. Will Bella still find out about vampires maybe you could have James kidnap Bella and that could be how she finds out or does she find out in New Moon from the wolves. Plz update soon.
9time-twilightI hope Addison doesn't let Alice walk all over her like Bella did in canon. Will Bella still find out about vampires maybe you could have James kidnap Bella and that could be how she finds out or does she find out in New Moon from the wolves. Plz update soon.