for Human (Rewrite V2) NEW REWRITE POSTED ON 01-02-2410/27/2020 c15 
24Ghostwriter71
Sometimes, for all their imagined superiority and intelligence, these vampires can act pretty animalistic. :/ That's not a criticism of your chapter or awesome writing skills. It's just sometimes I read about vampires and I'm like, "I'm laughing at the superior intellect".
Also, absolutely no need to apologize for the delay in posting. All of us who write understand completely.
Excellent work. :)
24Ghostwriter71Sometimes, for all their imagined superiority and intelligence, these vampires can act pretty animalistic. :/ That's not a criticism of your chapter or awesome writing skills. It's just sometimes I read about vampires and I'm like, "I'm laughing at the superior intellect".
Also, absolutely no need to apologize for the delay in posting. All of us who write understand completely.
Excellent work. :)
10/26/2020 c15 Debbie Hicks
16. Chapter 16. then sudden;l;y Bella was bitte the burn began the sufferd blood lust the blood bonded Jake dranlk blood the sudenlt marked him as her mate something was not her was not human anymoed the best friens blood bonded by force to three with both then then Aliens/Vulcans was Not human at all herself ewas Marked as his the Volturi found her gifted of Empathy telekinesis and Touch telepathy and ESP From a house herself focused her thoughts transforming into a lethal gift was a Self-defensive mental and physical shiled holding her cosplay weapon her eyes were Crimson Whispering Dead Scream held firmly hair in a ball bangs slowly vibarating her then swirling more the garnet time rod the vibrating loudly echoing you die Changed bitten then with they ffrom herre screaming the good you newborns die surrendered then Burnt alone within the change for 3 painfully fiery days ewe rescued her the damage was too late entered was far to iciest coldest chained the herself screaming she will be turned with three Executed with us/they tornm the Venom was on her both wrists was suffering three day alone Esme If she is a Vampire slayer herself was far too cold from the venom oh my god Bella the herself used her powers to mind meld she's gifted nuked us/they her/they torn the Venom was spreading then blew brought there good new addictions bitten by snakes killed her/they the three nuked it spread what is she not human wearing a ball and bangs longer flowing hair onto her a sera'fuku earrings and choker with a star with a short skirt with keys eyes are Red collar with a line she's Sailor Pluto completely saying in a sad voice aimed her weapon is Ancient but very old but guards over the door of time is a princess of Pluto end them in time herself had Anmesia was unable to remember but she herself recallimg from the 30th century and Crystal Tokyo and onto her forehead was a radiant golden tiara was doing her lines was with a gem gasp what is she then herself never aged haven't died it was permamently stopped the aging process was halted was gone was Immortal so do I Then nuked Sliced but lost from here then brought there good dead they are lost then Beheaded executed then herself felt venom from here was very thirsty sis my throat hurts it's scorching what Am I Please you are a Special Vampire with they then Blew us sisters with they good blew apart drained of more blood new addictions of there they forged the Phoenix coven nuked were as all of them nuked freely bring them then with freaks then too late ripped apart then head-cords with three were Nuked mutating the he retested her my sister used her powers oh my god sher's different then in time both manors merged wit the five nuked with cars/trucks nuked with as all of stored things nuked with us/they good bring them there then in time herself never was human with they stopped death from here the too much more venom alterd her/they as fighters then nuked was over herself needed blood ftrom animals to devour then chanting out to her oh my god she is in white jewelry was sacrificed to them as a priestess then newspapers reported a very large coven-pack united by blood and venom bound by minds and katras nuked Were nuked good bring the both they are not fit to live with humans too late Ashes good Lycan blood and fur with them killed more Volturi guards nuked frely re as all of them then lost forever aboard without family.
16. Chapter 16. then sudden;l;y Bella was bitte the burn began the sufferd blood lust the blood bonded Jake dranlk blood the sudenlt marked him as her mate something was not her was not human anymoed the best friens blood bonded by force to three with both then then Aliens/Vulcans was Not human at all herself ewas Marked as his the Volturi found her gifted of Empathy telekinesis and Touch telepathy and ESP From a house herself focused her thoughts transforming into a lethal gift was a Self-defensive mental and physical shiled holding her cosplay weapon her eyes were Crimson Whispering Dead Scream held firmly hair in a ball bangs slowly vibarating her then swirling more the garnet time rod the vibrating loudly echoing you die Changed bitten then with they ffrom herre screaming the good you newborns die surrendered then Burnt alone within the change for 3 painfully fiery days ewe rescued her the damage was too late entered was far to iciest coldest chained the herself screaming she will be turned with three Executed with us/they tornm the Venom was on her both wrists was suffering three day alone Esme If she is a Vampire slayer herself was far too cold from the venom oh my god Bella the herself used her powers to mind meld she's gifted nuked us/they her/they torn the Venom was spreading then blew brought there good new addictions bitten by snakes killed her/they the three nuked it spread what is she not human wearing a ball and bangs longer flowing hair onto her a sera'fuku earrings and choker with a star with a short skirt with keys eyes are Red collar with a line she's Sailor Pluto completely saying in a sad voice aimed her weapon is Ancient but very old but guards over the door of time is a princess of Pluto end them in time herself had Anmesia was unable to remember but she herself recallimg from the 30th century and Crystal Tokyo and onto her forehead was a radiant golden tiara was doing her lines was with a gem gasp what is she then herself never aged haven't died it was permamently stopped the aging process was halted was gone was Immortal so do I Then nuked Sliced but lost from here then brought there good dead they are lost then Beheaded executed then herself felt venom from here was very thirsty sis my throat hurts it's scorching what Am I Please you are a Special Vampire with they then Blew us sisters with they good blew apart drained of more blood new addictions of there they forged the Phoenix coven nuked were as all of them nuked freely bring them then with freaks then too late ripped apart then head-cords with three were Nuked mutating the he retested her my sister used her powers oh my god sher's different then in time both manors merged wit the five nuked with cars/trucks nuked with as all of stored things nuked with us/they good bring them there then in time herself never was human with they stopped death from here the too much more venom alterd her/they as fighters then nuked was over herself needed blood ftrom animals to devour then chanting out to her oh my god she is in white jewelry was sacrificed to them as a priestess then newspapers reported a very large coven-pack united by blood and venom bound by minds and katras nuked Were nuked good bring the both they are not fit to live with humans too late Ashes good Lycan blood and fur with them killed more Volturi guards nuked frely re as all of them then lost forever aboard without family.
10/26/2020 c15 9time-twilight
Great chapter. I thought with Addison transforming from vampire to human that Alice won't be able to see Addison in a vision. Are you going to do a chapter in Third person Pov to show what the cullens think of Addison after they find out she's a vampire.
9time-twilightGreat chapter. I thought with Addison transforming from vampire to human that Alice won't be able to see Addison in a vision. Are you going to do a chapter in Third person Pov to show what the cullens think of Addison after they find out she's a vampire.
8/26/2020 c15 Guest
I'm disappointed that you haven't updated... I need my fix! Please!
I'm disappointed that you haven't updated... I need my fix! Please!
7/28/2020 c2 Vega-Pandora
I'm pretty sure it takes a few days for the transformation from human to vampire to fully complete
I'm pretty sure it takes a few days for the transformation from human to vampire to fully complete
7/10/2020 c15 Guest
Hey! I really like this story and the new angle you’ve come at the story from. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more! So excited for the reactions of the rest of the Cullens. Can Alice see her? What theories will Carlisle have?
Hey! I really like this story and the new angle you’ve come at the story from. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more! So excited for the reactions of the rest of the Cullens. Can Alice see her? What theories will Carlisle have?
6/11/2020 c15 Guest
Where's the update? Please? Love this story.
Where's the update? Please? Love this story.
6/4/2020 c15 Guest
So, is “look out for a new chapter soon” the new term for “ya gotta wait a couple months... maybe a year”? *pouts*
So, is “look out for a new chapter soon” the new term for “ya gotta wait a couple months... maybe a year”? *pouts*
5/19/2020 c14 9time-twilight
When will Bella find out about vampires. Will James hunt Bella to get at Addie. What is going to happen in New moon, will the Cullen's leave like in canon because with Addie being a vampire Edward would have no reason to leave.
9time-twilightWhen will Bella find out about vampires. Will James hunt Bella to get at Addie. What is going to happen in New moon, will the Cullen's leave like in canon because with Addie being a vampire Edward would have no reason to leave.
4/27/2020 c15 Guest
Thought you were going to update?
Thought you were going to update?
4/26/2020 c15 harlibarli
when you get excited for a new update but it's just an update from over a month ago saying 'update soon'
when you get excited for a new update but it's just an update from over a month ago saying 'update soon'