for Human (Rewrite V2) NEW REWRITE POSTED ON 01-02-244/5/2020 c15 Drayne3
I hope you'll update soon, because the meeting with the Cullens is what I've been waiting for~
I hope you'll update soon, because the meeting with the Cullens is what I've been waiting for~
4/5/2020 c11 Guest
"Not really. I only know what semiformal wear is because I've been to a couple of school dances up in Phoenix."
Didn't she think about how she hadn't gone to any dances just a few chapters earlier? Why is she lying to the girls?
"Not really. I only know what semiformal wear is because I've been to a couple of school dances up in Phoenix."
Didn't she think about how she hadn't gone to any dances just a few chapters earlier? Why is she lying to the girls?
4/5/2020 c9 Guest
Addison doesn't want others to know her secret. Wouldn't that make her more empathetic to Edward wanting to keep his secrets?
Addison doesn't want others to know her secret. Wouldn't that make her more empathetic to Edward wanting to keep his secrets?
4/5/2020 c6 Guest
"I could care less about this." Should it be "couldn't care less"?
"I could care less about this." Should it be "couldn't care less"?
4/5/2020 c4 Guest
The only way I could see then being twins was if it was fraternal, but even that was a stretch.
Well, they couldn't be identical twins, as they are of a different sex.
The only way I could see then being twins was if it was fraternal, but even that was a stretch.
Well, they couldn't be identical twins, as they are of a different sex.
4/5/2020 c15 Debbie Hicks
16. Chapter 16.
Bella's pov ALIE CTREATURES MANGLED But mauled tore the n with Transportetr kids of eight wre all-Venomous began to hurt me more with Jake's hybrid kids Veno m was in my system then had To eat Blood it's killijng me inside sunken gaunt weakemn by as all of as each planetary snakes prophecized too late Ate Jake's blod again to three to more with Pregnant best friends with eight was sickest sickly green-blue was grey then to Kids/toddlers to Aliens/Vulcan he did the same the guard then myself screaming take care of the newborns then too late Fire was venomous good mine then blacking out was so sick then myself desired to feed again the signs of a Vampire tell them then Experimented-Augmented five to six both fusion then then you Isabela Jacob are punished with they then a shattering as all then sickest was with a sunken face good they are dying then too late Killed by my kids then suffered so they wit both good then what this a crest then with the Phoenix coven then then too late Memories erased from here by three finally both but head-cord combination they fled wit they good myself appeared weaken with a heaviest bite on the neck the was pure venomous with they hadf hybvrids then captured see humans you broke law screaming then Nothingness had Anmesia was Anmnesiac unable to remember my psast life Alice found me ill was with hair grew back long with bangs was colorless unable to be killed Alice it's them nuked them with us/they punished Sliced bot then lost my humanity with theirs with both Brought both good experiment onto them they can't mate at all of it with they then too late myself struggled of the thirst and was unable to bear more kids the kids were teenagers Alice who done to her my sister/best friends with they then too late myself was already dead but was Immortal had a very painful headache shielding mostly much many more as all of it too late trained by my sister was Gifted was a Self-Defensive mental and Physical shield was strongest but mostly more powerful then Pierced with her/they sliced both by vanishing good new addictions to them are dead drained as very far as all ,more mazillions and monstrously all of blood then too late rip with witnesess them alive then too late Alice she is not human oh my god with they are in fact Vampire slayers/hunters gasp have found her powers oh no then in time was Paler had fiery yellow/black eyes by now was in fact not mortal so he/they with each five had kids had children of their own had attained Kolinahr Alice she's telepathic can send her mind-voice oh my god she's not sleeping or eating she undead so us/they then in a Unicat in time asleep nuked freely wholliest but vanished good never returned then Aro we report a crime of what hybrids dead with you then guilty with these ones blew up experiment onto them again then screams then lost from here then Ashes good send them to our garden then too late more than as all of them more Volturi guards then too late as all of humans nuked with both blew Volturi Guards then nuked heirs good mine with these ones joined my coven then was far too paler due the lack of blood as all of it never aged was stronger three times then too late was not human.
16. Chapter 16.
Bella's pov ALIE CTREATURES MANGLED But mauled tore the n with Transportetr kids of eight wre all-Venomous began to hurt me more with Jake's hybrid kids Veno m was in my system then had To eat Blood it's killijng me inside sunken gaunt weakemn by as all of as each planetary snakes prophecized too late Ate Jake's blod again to three to more with Pregnant best friends with eight was sickest sickly green-blue was grey then to Kids/toddlers to Aliens/Vulcan he did the same the guard then myself screaming take care of the newborns then too late Fire was venomous good mine then blacking out was so sick then myself desired to feed again the signs of a Vampire tell them then Experimented-Augmented five to six both fusion then then you Isabela Jacob are punished with they then a shattering as all then sickest was with a sunken face good they are dying then too late Killed by my kids then suffered so they wit both good then what this a crest then with the Phoenix coven then then too late Memories erased from here by three finally both but head-cord combination they fled wit they good myself appeared weaken with a heaviest bite on the neck the was pure venomous with they hadf hybvrids then captured see humans you broke law screaming then Nothingness had Anmesia was Anmnesiac unable to remember my psast life Alice found me ill was with hair grew back long with bangs was colorless unable to be killed Alice it's them nuked them with us/they punished Sliced bot then lost my humanity with theirs with both Brought both good experiment onto them they can't mate at all of it with they then too late myself struggled of the thirst and was unable to bear more kids the kids were teenagers Alice who done to her my sister/best friends with they then too late myself was already dead but was Immortal had a very painful headache shielding mostly much many more as all of it too late trained by my sister was Gifted was a Self-Defensive mental and Physical shield was strongest but mostly more powerful then Pierced with her/they sliced both by vanishing good new addictions to them are dead drained as very far as all ,more mazillions and monstrously all of blood then too late rip with witnesess them alive then too late Alice she is not human oh my god with they are in fact Vampire slayers/hunters gasp have found her powers oh no then in time was Paler had fiery yellow/black eyes by now was in fact not mortal so he/they with each five had kids had children of their own had attained Kolinahr Alice she's telepathic can send her mind-voice oh my god she's not sleeping or eating she undead so us/they then in a Unicat in time asleep nuked freely wholliest but vanished good never returned then Aro we report a crime of what hybrids dead with you then guilty with these ones blew up experiment onto them again then screams then lost from here then Ashes good send them to our garden then too late more than as all of them more Volturi guards then too late as all of humans nuked with both blew Volturi Guards then nuked heirs good mine with these ones joined my coven then was far too paler due the lack of blood as all of it never aged was stronger three times then too late was not human.
4/5/2020 c15 Guest
Yesss, finally! Waiting
Yesss, finally! Waiting
22/12/2020 c14 Guest
Please update soon I've been waiting months and really enjoy this story
Please update soon I've been waiting months and really enjoy this story
2/5/2020 c7 DawnScarlet19610
I don't understand how Addie's car was suddenly at school for her to go pick up. She rode with Bella to school in the truck, so that made no sense. Still no description of her appearance. There's no way she wouldn't notice the change in her skin and look in a mirror to see what she look like. Especially since the vampire who attacked her had red eyes...
I don't understand how Addie's car was suddenly at school for her to go pick up. She rode with Bella to school in the truck, so that made no sense. Still no description of her appearance. There's no way she wouldn't notice the change in her skin and look in a mirror to see what she look like. Especially since the vampire who attacked her had red eyes...
2/5/2020 c3 DawnScarlet19610
This is incredible. The way you describe the change is so well done. I was so excited to read this fic, and then so disappointed when you used the movie version instead of the book version. I'm hoping very much that you will not continue doing that. I'm also hoping for a description of Addie, since you haven't given us a visual yet in either human or vampire form.
This is incredible. The way you describe the change is so well done. I was so excited to read this fic, and then so disappointed when you used the movie version instead of the book version. I'm hoping very much that you will not continue doing that. I'm also hoping for a description of Addie, since you haven't given us a visual yet in either human or vampire form.