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7/13/2019 c1 sujari6
Interesting story. Loved reading it.
6/26/2019 c1 Guest
The story sounds interesting but I had to stop reading after a bit because of how rigid and mechanical it sounds. I'm sure there'll be people who won't mind but it makes it really hard for me to focus. I just kept reading short sentences that had very little if any emotion to them and they couldn't catch my attention, I'm not sure how to explain or if you'll get what I mean or if you'll care at all but I'm not saying this to be hateful! Just wanted to share some constructive criticism because it's something that's stopped me from enjoying stories in the past and other people mention it too or just refuse to read, I wanted to share my perspective so it's something you may consider in the future.
6/27/2019 c1 acw1
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