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12/10/2023 c2 M1stymix
isn't the reason the marines are usually the villains is because of basically the lap dogs of the celestial dragons?
11/20/2023 c27 2merendinoemiliano
Very well written developement of the whole mission
10/29/2023 c26 dan.lew.upg
good
10/20/2023 c2 Darkjaden
Why didn't he train at all before getting his fruit?
10/15/2023 c25 JustAhelper
To the "Gigame" guy in the reviews, have you tried reading through the browser? It'll probably work through there, it's quite easy to use.
10/15/2023 c24 Gigame
I am sad now, both because I can't read the 26th chapter and I've reached the maximum something something for the comment in chapter 25
10/15/2023 c25 Gigame
deleting and re downloading the story ain't working either
10/15/2023 c25 Gigame
weird, it's says that the newest chapter updated to 26, and the comments are commenting about chapter 26, the story also shows 26 chapters, and yet all I can read are 1-25 chapters. where are thou 26th chapters
10/13/2023 c26 huuduy.nguyen1234567890
Thx for the chapter
10/13/2023 c26 merendinoemiliano
Simple but well described chapter, best of luck with nexts
10/5/2023 c1 Uvuvwevwevwe Onyetenyevwe Ugwe
What do you mean where D on top the marine? Arent Garp are D? Monkey D Garp? Really mate. Arent sengoku best friend of Garp and he knows how sengoku works. Better be revolutionaries. They are kind of rare in fanfics.
10/1/2023 c5 Blue-Happens
lightning rasengan come on Chidori was right there! I know it's not as well known of a reference, but it is literally that.

not really important I guess, its just peeving me out
10/1/2023 c3 Blue-Happens
you got some basic grammar mistakes, missing words, wrong but similar words in context. the simple things that a squiggly red line in a word doc won't pick up on.

doing a read through in a slightly different font or something would be very beneficial to you! or a beta reader but I've never had the pleasure of using one.

still a fun story tho! I've always wanted an actual good marine story! we'll see how he reacts to the horrid shiz in there, and how he (potentially) makes things better. good luck with whatever you're doing today
9/20/2023 c25 dan.lew.upg
cant wait for more
9/11/2023 c25 huuduy.nguyen1234567890
Thx for the new chapter
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