for One Piece: Lightning Dragon3/22/2024 c7 realfan16
hope we won't have to see a training montage of gis time in Marineford. Just the last scene of a man and his tiger overlooking the sunset was foreshadowing asf. i already can see a future scene. some name less pirate's pov: They were so close to escape , they just had to get to the balcony and jump down. Just across the street laid the harbor , the overly large marine ship would surely take time to undock. But then just as they reached the balcony and prepared to jump down.
"What a beautiful sunset!" Came the soft exclamation from somewhere in their left. He couldn't help the sheer dread that overtook him the moment he heard. His two other companions were not better as they resigned themselves to their fate. It might've been a three on one and they only had to escape but each knew it was hopeless. The man calmly sitting on the roof right to their left, seemingly not having noticed them continued to pet his Khan the fearsome tiger from which the insignia of the Khan Marines were based on. They knew they were no match for the captain who was rumoured to be a storm god, facing him on sea was plainly suicidal...
hope we won't have to see a training montage of gis time in Marineford. Just the last scene of a man and his tiger overlooking the sunset was foreshadowing asf. i already can see a future scene. some name less pirate's pov: They were so close to escape , they just had to get to the balcony and jump down. Just across the street laid the harbor , the overly large marine ship would surely take time to undock. But then just as they reached the balcony and prepared to jump down.
"What a beautiful sunset!" Came the soft exclamation from somewhere in their left. He couldn't help the sheer dread that overtook him the moment he heard. His two other companions were not better as they resigned themselves to their fate. It might've been a three on one and they only had to escape but each knew it was hopeless. The man calmly sitting on the roof right to their left, seemingly not having noticed them continued to pet his Khan the fearsome tiger from which the insignia of the Khan Marines were based on. They knew they were no match for the captain who was rumoured to be a storm god, facing him on sea was plainly suicidal...
3/14/2024 c29 Sodomi
Sooo, I've been wondering. Will this story tie into the actual plot of one piece at some point?
Like meeting Luffy for example? That would be something I am looking forward to
Sooo, I've been wondering. Will this story tie into the actual plot of one piece at some point?
Like meeting Luffy for example? That would be something I am looking forward to
3/11/2024 c29 King0fP0wers
How ironic. Aokiji was a student of Garp and his teacher's grandson is idolizing him. I think Aokiji could also learn some things from Lucas, just as he might teach him. Nonetheless, a happy family reunion obviously has to end with a fight, no? Frankly, I'm glad that Garp has one relative he doesn't have to worry about... that much.
Smokey! So nice to see him! I can't wait to see Lucas and company working for the griff cowboy cop marine! Smoker is great, I'd say his biggest flaw is that he simply lacks the sheer destructive power of some characters like in the New World. This will be fun!
How ironic. Aokiji was a student of Garp and his teacher's grandson is idolizing him. I think Aokiji could also learn some things from Lucas, just as he might teach him. Nonetheless, a happy family reunion obviously has to end with a fight, no? Frankly, I'm glad that Garp has one relative he doesn't have to worry about... that much.
Smokey! So nice to see him! I can't wait to see Lucas and company working for the griff cowboy cop marine! Smoker is great, I'd say his biggest flaw is that he simply lacks the sheer destructive power of some characters like in the New World. This will be fun!
3/11/2024 c29 
2blackbloodywolf
Great new chapter! Can't wait to see where we are going with Smoker next
2blackbloodywolfGreat new chapter! Can't wait to see where we are going with Smoker next
2/29/2024 c28 Gigame
oh yeah, I forgot to add this last night but, I am indeed excited for the future chapters, may you have a good day author.
oh yeah, I forgot to add this last night but, I am indeed excited for the future chapters, may you have a good day author.
2/28/2024 c28 Gigame
while I do admit that, this arc is not really my favorite or something I enjoyed deeply, I can see that this was a good development for our dear mc, and i was surprised that my hunch was right and he was getting a little cocky and that he was humbled before things went a few more steps into chaos, and I do want to say a few more things but this comment that I have been wanting to share is a few months late, and it's almost 1am, I need to sleep XD
while I do admit that, this arc is not really my favorite or something I enjoyed deeply, I can see that this was a good development for our dear mc, and i was surprised that my hunch was right and he was getting a little cocky and that he was humbled before things went a few more steps into chaos, and I do want to say a few more things but this comment that I have been wanting to share is a few months late, and it's almost 1am, I need to sleep XD
1/10/2024 c28 2merendinoemiliano
Very badass and dynamic, best of luck with next events. Happy new year.
2merendinoemilianoVery badass and dynamic, best of luck with next events. Happy new year.
1/1/2024 c5 darthkratos24
Ehhh pussy, a true warrior would give his opponent an honourable death. But this one cowers before it disappointing first sparing pirates and now random animals. This is why kenpatchi is and will always be one of the few true warriors in all of fiction. So many have such hypocritical morals. "I'm a warrior but I don't harm" "I love fighting but killings bad" where's the fun without risk! You should live for the life or death moment let the adrenaline flow! Saver the kill of a worthy opponent or die with honour and pride. A true warrior will never hold back as that's just a great way to get killed if they die quickly then they are unworthy of you but if they put up a fight?! Well then the funs just beginning... Time to see who enters Valhalla this day. Even at 15 this young man as you say should know this but then again it's one piece so no high hopes for true warriors.
Fun story so far though.
Ehhh pussy, a true warrior would give his opponent an honourable death. But this one cowers before it disappointing first sparing pirates and now random animals. This is why kenpatchi is and will always be one of the few true warriors in all of fiction. So many have such hypocritical morals. "I'm a warrior but I don't harm" "I love fighting but killings bad" where's the fun without risk! You should live for the life or death moment let the adrenaline flow! Saver the kill of a worthy opponent or die with honour and pride. A true warrior will never hold back as that's just a great way to get killed if they die quickly then they are unworthy of you but if they put up a fight?! Well then the funs just beginning... Time to see who enters Valhalla this day. Even at 15 this young man as you say should know this but then again it's one piece so no high hopes for true warriors.
Fun story so far though.
1/1/2024 c4 darthkratos24
I notice you say desert island but then mentioned trees
... So I'm assuming you mean deserted island as a desert island means baren so no trees no life no anything. And a deserted island mostly means no sentient life
I notice you say desert island but then mentioned trees
... So I'm assuming you mean deserted island as a desert island means baren so no trees no life no anything. And a deserted island mostly means no sentient life
12/10/2023 c2 M1stymix
isn't the reason the marines are usually the villains is because of basically the lap dogs of the celestial dragons?
isn't the reason the marines are usually the villains is because of basically the lap dogs of the celestial dragons?