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4/19/2023 c12 yahiro365
LMAO
4/19/2023 c10 yahiro365
cool flights
4/19/2023 c9 yahiro365
I've noticed a few grammar/spelling errors, but those are inconsequential to how entertaining this story is. The MCs devil fruit is very cool, Tashigi is awesome, and the new guy Torlo is funny. Very cool stuff
1/16/2023 c2 realfan16
...ngl the first chap was somewhat fine. this had me wincing every my mind corrected the grammar. plot seems to have potential tho
12/30/2022 c20 dansfanfic5555
cant wait for more
12/23/2022 c2 12CaptainBoyHole
Oh... The title was being literal...

I'm no longer interested in reading.
12/23/2022 c1 CaptainBoyHole
You do not know how much I'm looking forward to this. There are not enough marine fics.
12/21/2022 c5 Hellibleri
I like this story so far. The main character isn’t annoying and, uniquely, mourns for his past life. It’s a nice story so far, and your English is fine for it not being your first language.
12/18/2022 c20 2SupremeBlack
Pretty sure the girl is Jewelry Bonney...
Great chapter!
12/17/2022 c20 Slimereader11
Thanks for the update.
12/16/2022 c20 Turtletipper123
damn a cliffhanger. good chapter though. suspense is done pretty well in it.
12/16/2022 c20 Tenma Kirin
Continue, pls!
12/15/2022 c3 cremisius
oh boy, I've been looking for a MarineOC one piece for so long and the 1st one that I found looks like a gem. looking forward to reading more of this. keep it up!
12/13/2022 c19 Read Falcon
Love thie fic, great concept executed well. Probably going a little too slow for my liking but still worth a read. Hoping speed up soon becuase the small crimes are a bit tedious, and while the fight scenes are well written, I tend to skip them becuase there's no tension, nothing at stake. It feels like these scenes are just taking up so much space in the chapters without really contributing to the stoey. That said, please keep up the good work.
12/10/2022 c4 ArtsyNoko
Damn, this is a good read.
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