for One Piece: Lightning Dragon12/21/2022 c5 Hellibleri
I like this story so far. The main character isn’t annoying and, uniquely, mourns for his past life. It’s a nice story so far, and your English is fine for it not being your first language.
I like this story so far. The main character isn’t annoying and, uniquely, mourns for his past life. It’s a nice story so far, and your English is fine for it not being your first language.
12/16/2022 c20 Turtletipper123
damn a cliffhanger. good chapter though. suspense is done pretty well in it.
damn a cliffhanger. good chapter though. suspense is done pretty well in it.
12/15/2022 c3 cremisius
oh boy, I've been looking for a MarineOC one piece for so long and the 1st one that I found looks like a gem. looking forward to reading more of this. keep it up!
oh boy, I've been looking for a MarineOC one piece for so long and the 1st one that I found looks like a gem. looking forward to reading more of this. keep it up!
12/13/2022 c19 Read Falcon
Love thie fic, great concept executed well. Probably going a little too slow for my liking but still worth a read. Hoping speed up soon becuase the small crimes are a bit tedious, and while the fight scenes are well written, I tend to skip them becuase there's no tension, nothing at stake. It feels like these scenes are just taking up so much space in the chapters without really contributing to the stoey. That said, please keep up the good work.
Love thie fic, great concept executed well. Probably going a little too slow for my liking but still worth a read. Hoping speed up soon becuase the small crimes are a bit tedious, and while the fight scenes are well written, I tend to skip them becuase there's no tension, nothing at stake. It feels like these scenes are just taking up so much space in the chapters without really contributing to the stoey. That said, please keep up the good work.
12/5/2022 c19 
1EliteShadow
love this story so far keep up the great work and i hope to keep on reading more of this great story keep on writing more please!~
1EliteShadowlove this story so far keep up the great work and i hope to keep on reading more of this great story keep on writing more please!~
12/5/2022 c3 1Amba-Tubloe
I like it, but please at the very least run this through grammarly. You got some incomplete sentences in here as well.
1Amba-TubloeI like it, but please at the very least run this through grammarly. You got some incomplete sentences in here as well.
11/17/2022 c18 Natsukashi
I like it. Nice to see the marine side of things. The little laughs from the interaction between garp sengoku and tsuru where funny too, please more in the future. Hope you Update soon and thanks for your story.
I like it. Nice to see the marine side of things. The little laughs from the interaction between garp sengoku and tsuru where funny too, please more in the future. Hope you Update soon and thanks for your story.
10/27/2022 c17 ymrgf
I think I know the reason why OP doesn't have many good fics despite it's huge fandom and huge amount of materials for a fanfic.
1. The original is so good that fanfic that tried to follow/modify the original plots resulting in cheap copy of original. Same thing happened to fanfics with SI/OC that joined Luffy.
2. Fanfics that using wider world as settings need decent writings, especially with many OC/background characters used in those fics. Many stories looks shallow on this category because it can't offer the same joy of adventuring from original story. Unfortunately this story is in latter category.
I think I know the reason why OP doesn't have many good fics despite it's huge fandom and huge amount of materials for a fanfic.
1. The original is so good that fanfic that tried to follow/modify the original plots resulting in cheap copy of original. Same thing happened to fanfics with SI/OC that joined Luffy.
2. Fanfics that using wider world as settings need decent writings, especially with many OC/background characters used in those fics. Many stories looks shallow on this category because it can't offer the same joy of adventuring from original story. Unfortunately this story is in latter category.
10/26/2022 c17 Guest
You're back, cool.
You're back, cool.