for Ascension12/4 c44 Olof1
When is the next bloody update? Its been more 4 months now
When is the next bloody update? Its been more 4 months now
11/4 c44 Guest
There’s been something that’s been bugging me about this story, but I wasn’t able to narrow down what it was until this chapter. It feels like you jumped the gun when it comes to plot structure. This current arc that you have put Red through, it feels like something he should be encountering around badge 7-8. Have him encounter the people attending this party on his way through Kanto. As for Cynthia, have her meeting with Red be similar to Alain’s first meeting Ash. While most of the chapters are great, I feel it would be cool to have Cynthia exploring her own character arc to finalizing what she wants to do. While it may be a priority of hers to become a Pokémon researcher, keeping her battling skills sharp doesn’t hurt her chances of researching in hostile environments.
There’s been something that’s been bugging me about this story, but I wasn’t able to narrow down what it was until this chapter. It feels like you jumped the gun when it comes to plot structure. This current arc that you have put Red through, it feels like something he should be encountering around badge 7-8. Have him encounter the people attending this party on his way through Kanto. As for Cynthia, have her meeting with Red be similar to Alain’s first meeting Ash. While most of the chapters are great, I feel it would be cool to have Cynthia exploring her own character arc to finalizing what she wants to do. While it may be a priority of hers to become a Pokémon researcher, keeping her battling skills sharp doesn’t hurt her chances of researching in hostile environments.
10/13 c44 Guest
its been more than 2 months since last update
its been more than 2 months since last update
9/30 c38 Guest
Simply some of the best Pokémon fanfiction out there.
Simply some of the best Pokémon fanfiction out there.
9/21 c1 
2cosmic darkrai
So this is basically The incompetent Ash replaced by the Natural unlimited potential of Red
2cosmic darkraiSo this is basically The incompetent Ash replaced by the Natural unlimited potential of Red
9/13 c44 Puffy Harp Seal
I am nicely surprised to see that this story is still getting updated after I took a break for a year or so, please keep it up!
I am nicely surprised to see that this story is still getting updated after I took a break for a year or so, please keep it up!
9/7 c44 Guest
Update?
Update?
8/15 c36 Guest
Chapter 36. I hope we get the original Mew or some other Legendary to challenge Mewtwo. It would be so cool.
Chapter 36. I hope we get the original Mew or some other Legendary to challenge Mewtwo. It would be so cool.
8/1 c44 1TheGreatBubbaJ
Things are looking rough, it'll be interesting to see a calm moment again once all is said and done.
1TheGreatBubbaJThings are looking rough, it'll be interesting to see a calm moment again once all is said and done.
7/30 c44 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
6Yaw6113Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
7/29 c44 kaxipoptos
Shit got (even more) real. Growlithe really came through for his team, hopefully this will allow him to grow out of his shell and become the best doggo we all know he is.
Proton defeating Cynthia was expected. For all her talent she isn't experienced enough and her pokemon are too underpowered to really pose a challenge to proton's.
Kind of surprising that "sabrina" is still standing and is capable of action. Mewtwo is powerful but he is currently in a human body with all it's limitations (durability, ability to channel his power etc), my guess is that he doesn't give two shits about the body he occupies so he goes all out no matter how harmful it may be.
Still I hope the whole thing to be resolved soon-ish, it has been going on for quite a while (chapter-wise).
Shit got (even more) real. Growlithe really came through for his team, hopefully this will allow him to grow out of his shell and become the best doggo we all know he is.
Proton defeating Cynthia was expected. For all her talent she isn't experienced enough and her pokemon are too underpowered to really pose a challenge to proton's.
Kind of surprising that "sabrina" is still standing and is capable of action. Mewtwo is powerful but he is currently in a human body with all it's limitations (durability, ability to channel his power etc), my guess is that he doesn't give two shits about the body he occupies so he goes all out no matter how harmful it may be.
Still I hope the whole thing to be resolved soon-ish, it has been going on for quite a while (chapter-wise).