5/19 c198 7DrWandel
I tend to agree with Jack - this is not bad news, but great news. Hopefully, something interesting will happen for and with Sam, during and after training. While I understand that this is a very long story, it's about time to head towards something which is 'space' and 'star' oriented, in my opinion.
I tend to agree with Jack - this is not bad news, but great news. Hopefully, something interesting will happen for and with Sam, during and after training. While I understand that this is a very long story, it's about time to head towards something which is 'space' and 'star' oriented, in my opinion.
5/17 c1 mmst1958
I ran through the chapters and did not understand the humor, this is a stargate, but without a stargate. Is that so? I don't even know if it's worth starting to read without adventures on other planets. Correct me if I'm wrong. Thank you for your attention. Yes, I immediately noticed that in some places it is very reminiscent of a report on the work done, and not a work of art. Thank you for your attention.
I ran through the chapters and did not understand the humor, this is a stargate, but without a stargate. Is that so? I don't even know if it's worth starting to read without adventures on other planets. Correct me if I'm wrong. Thank you for your attention. Yes, I immediately noticed that in some places it is very reminiscent of a report on the work done, and not a work of art. Thank you for your attention.
12/17/2023 c197 DrWandel
Sam is on the list to maybe fly with the Space Shuttle 'Enterprise'? Well, as long as it isn't the 'Challenger' or the 'Columbia'...
Somehow Sam's careergoes in a slightly different direction than in the series, but that's all right, as long as she will get to the stargate eventually. You could even bring in some variations, if you wanted, like they find a stargate or even some (Ancient?) spaceship wreck on the moon.
Sam is on the list to maybe fly with the Space Shuttle 'Enterprise'? Well, as long as it isn't the 'Challenger' or the 'Columbia'...
Somehow Sam's careergoes in a slightly different direction than in the series, but that's all right, as long as she will get to the stargate eventually. You could even bring in some variations, if you wanted, like they find a stargate or even some (Ancient?) spaceship wreck on the moon.
12/16/2023 c197 kerrylynn2004
Awesome Chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing them grow and see how the Ancients fit into the story. Thanks for keeping this story going. I love Stargate stories.
Awesome Chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing them grow and see how the Ancients fit into the story. Thanks for keeping this story going. I love Stargate stories.
11/20/2023 c196 Ivonniva
I have really enjoyed this story, but ... here is some advise. You should read thru this story again, paying close attention to the "Time Line" of Samantha Carters "AGE" as she goes thru life. Trust me it is all over the place, most especially the first 75 chapters. Because that is where I am at in the story atm. Still, love the story.
I have really enjoyed this story, but ... here is some advise. You should read thru this story again, paying close attention to the "Time Line" of Samantha Carters "AGE" as she goes thru life. Trust me it is all over the place, most especially the first 75 chapters. Because that is where I am at in the story atm. Still, love the story.
11/2/2023 c196 DrWandel
Missed the last couple of updates due to the site's issues.
Nice to see some progress, but now work is catching up, and I will be loooking forward to reading more about the new NASA work. Let's also see what Jack's surprise is like, but it will be good - as Sam stated: "you can surprise me any time".
Missed the last couple of updates due to the site's issues.
Nice to see some progress, but now work is catching up, and I will be loooking forward to reading more about the new NASA work. Let's also see what Jack's surprise is like, but it will be good - as Sam stated: "you can surprise me any time".
8/1/2023 c74 38RoczaDeb
I love your long stories. The initial premise is far outside of canon. I like that. FYI. I’m a writer too. You dont have to be too detailed. ‘Take a break’ rather than outline everything done. ‘Stopped for food’ rather than detailing the meal or where they stopped. Readers have an excellent imagination. If the break or food is not important to the plot, don’t waste time trying to fill in uneeded details. As a reader, (rereading one of your awesome stories) I have gotten distracted by the number of time they go to the bathroom. I don’t need to know where they got fast food. My brain will fill in the blanks. I learned this from one of my favorite published Authors, Jeal Auel. One of her books was over 600 pages, but only about 100 applied to the story or plot. I just skipped chapters of writing to get to the plot. Remember, chocolate or candy… not Hershey’ Kisses with mint or a Payday bar. Don’t reseach the stuff that is not pertinant to the story. Excellent work on writing this fic.
I love your long stories. The initial premise is far outside of canon. I like that. FYI. I’m a writer too. You dont have to be too detailed. ‘Take a break’ rather than outline everything done. ‘Stopped for food’ rather than detailing the meal or where they stopped. Readers have an excellent imagination. If the break or food is not important to the plot, don’t waste time trying to fill in uneeded details. As a reader, (rereading one of your awesome stories) I have gotten distracted by the number of time they go to the bathroom. I don’t need to know where they got fast food. My brain will fill in the blanks. I learned this from one of my favorite published Authors, Jeal Auel. One of her books was over 600 pages, but only about 100 applied to the story or plot. I just skipped chapters of writing to get to the plot. Remember, chocolate or candy… not Hershey’ Kisses with mint or a Payday bar. Don’t reseach the stuff that is not pertinant to the story. Excellent work on writing this fic.
7/13/2023 c194 Michelle
Love love love
Love love love
6/10/2023 c194 7DrWandel
You make it look like it's so easy changing location, with two babies/toddlers, getting a new car, finding a new place to live, and the new job. Of course, this is Sam, and at least she does not have to worry about financial issues.
You make it look like it's so easy changing location, with two babies/toddlers, getting a new car, finding a new place to live, and the new job. Of course, this is Sam, and at least she does not have to worry about financial issues.
6/8/2023 c193 DrWandel
Wait, they got two babies and will have to plan for living in separate places, and Sam just accepts it like this?
On the other hand, it's about time for NASA to get involved, I guess.
Wait, they got two babies and will have to plan for living in separate places, and Sam just accepts it like this?
On the other hand, it's about time for NASA to get involved, I guess.
5/10/2023 c1 Guest
I ment the Force, the tablet for some reason turned the into rank I do not know why
I ment the Force, the tablet for some reason turned the into rank I do not know why
5/9/2023 c192 DrWandel
Good to see that Sam gets a chance to get back to work. Seems that were wasn't any major crisis she was urgently needed for while she was not available.
Good to see that Sam gets a chance to get back to work. Seems that were wasn't any major crisis she was urgently needed for while she was not available.
5/9/2023 c191 DrWandel
Doesn't work for me. I actually like to eat garlic and do that frequently, but I also have colds a lot.
Doesn't work for me. I actually like to eat garlic and do that frequently, but I also have colds a lot.
5/6/2023 c33 Guest
Basically Sam has the Rank Force, ya know from star wars
Basically Sam has the Rank Force, ya know from star wars