1/10 c66 keithmock25
Oh my goodness that’s so clever! I’ve really been enjoying your story, but I don’t usually leave comments until the end on the stories that are complete. You’re such a great author and I really look forward to reading more of your stuff! Well done and thanks for the story. It’s so hard to find good stories these days I feel like I’ve gone through them all….
-Keith
Oh my goodness that’s so clever! I’ve really been enjoying your story, but I don’t usually leave comments until the end on the stories that are complete. You’re such a great author and I really look forward to reading more of your stuff! Well done and thanks for the story. It’s so hard to find good stories these days I feel like I’ve gone through them all….
-Keith
12/28/2024 c19 MistyGirl2014
i absolutely adore this story, thank you so much for your hard work, its brilliant x
i absolutely adore this story, thank you so much for your hard work, its brilliant x
12/2/2024 c2 Guest
"something Hermione mentioned no doubt" why everybody make harry so generally ignorant
"something Hermione mentioned no doubt" why everybody make harry so generally ignorant
11/8/2024 c18 13ALPHA02FURY97
Hi, it's me again just to point on Chapter 18 I know you plan out a romantic scene between Harry and Natasha in this one but you made Natasha a bit of a little too much of a damsel and me just watching Black Widow not long ago She was trained to the point that she was able to both escape and infiltrated the most high security end facilities as a black widow Assassin even if she was captured a day or two she would formulated a plan of escaping she he type of woman that doesn't need saving even when she made a lover out of Bucky, Steve Rogers and even Bruce Banner and yes in some comics both Natasha and Bucky became an item because they were both in the same hydra program training which is the Red Room that facility doesn't just trained black Widows but Also Winter Soldiers though Hydra had more use in the Winter Soldier program as it's the very same foundation serum as the one used by Johann Schmidt Aka Red Skull. So yeah I love the ricand the chapter but I dislike the idea of having Natasha a bit too much a damsels into this chapter.
Hi, it's me again just to point on Chapter 18 I know you plan out a romantic scene between Harry and Natasha in this one but you made Natasha a bit of a little too much of a damsel and me just watching Black Widow not long ago She was trained to the point that she was able to both escape and infiltrated the most high security end facilities as a black widow Assassin even if she was captured a day or two she would formulated a plan of escaping she he type of woman that doesn't need saving even when she made a lover out of Bucky, Steve Rogers and even Bruce Banner and yes in some comics both Natasha and Bucky became an item because they were both in the same hydra program training which is the Red Room that facility doesn't just trained black Widows but Also Winter Soldiers though Hydra had more use in the Winter Soldier program as it's the very same foundation serum as the one used by Johann Schmidt Aka Red Skull. So yeah I love the ricand the chapter but I dislike the idea of having Natasha a bit too much a damsels into this chapter.
10/26/2024 c2 Allison
i like it. A cliff hanger to start.
Can't wait to read more.
i like it. A cliff hanger to start.
Can't wait to read more.
10/28/2024 c16 Wrixel
This chapter is definitely full of hope for the future. I enjoy these very much. thank you for your writing.
This chapter is definitely full of hope for the future. I enjoy these very much. thank you for your writing.
10/26/2024 c7 Exodus12345
Well, this will not go well when he finds out. Plus, how did he not spot her? You would think he would be able to tell another killer when he meets one.
Well, this will not go well when he finds out. Plus, how did he not spot her? You would think he would be able to tell another killer when he meets one.
10/20/2024 c27 6Primus2021
Before they said that it was Peter Parker, I always thought that it would have been nice if Harley keener was the kid under the toy Iron Man mask in Iron Man 2, I also thought it would be a great setup for him to come Iron Lad. Granted back then I was also hoping that either Tobey Maguire or Andrew Garfield was going to be introduced into the MCU, not the kid Tom Holland...
Before they said that it was Peter Parker, I always thought that it would have been nice if Harley keener was the kid under the toy Iron Man mask in Iron Man 2, I also thought it would be a great setup for him to come Iron Lad. Granted back then I was also hoping that either Tobey Maguire or Andrew Garfield was going to be introduced into the MCU, not the kid Tom Holland...
10/19/2024 c21 Primus2021
Harry could turn the spears of the Einhajar into Portkeys to Asgard, Midgar, Alfheim, Vanaheim, Muspulheim, and Jotunheim. Svelterheim is currently lost, only the royals go to Nedaviler, and no one wants to go to Helheim or Valhalla.
Harry could turn the spears of the Einhajar into Portkeys to Asgard, Midgar, Alfheim, Vanaheim, Muspulheim, and Jotunheim. Svelterheim is currently lost, only the royals go to Nedaviler, and no one wants to go to Helheim or Valhalla.
10/16/2024 c1 ArduinoRoxx
To guest -
It’s hilarious how much you claim to dislike this fic yet keep reading it. Pathetic little bitch.
To guest -
It’s hilarious how much you claim to dislike this fic yet keep reading it. Pathetic little bitch.
9/26/2024 c68 Isabellanecessity
This story was such an absolute joy to read. Good job! I'm off to read all your other stories now :D
This story was such an absolute joy to read. Good job! I'm off to read all your other stories now :D
8/28/2024 c69 Citan
Checking my profile, seems like i've read this 4 years ago but can't remember a single thing about it so its like a fresh read. It's still good but now i think it was a bit boring. I ended up skimming alot. I'm guessing its because Harry is too OP..
Checking my profile, seems like i've read this 4 years ago but can't remember a single thing about it so its like a fresh read. It's still good but now i think it was a bit boring. I ended up skimming alot. I'm guessing its because Harry is too OP..
8/22/2024 c24 George
You do realize any idiot can create water from the air? It's called a dehumidifier. They're available for sale everywhere. You just have to boil and filter it afterward.
You do realize any idiot can create water from the air? It's called a dehumidifier. They're available for sale everywhere. You just have to boil and filter it afterward.
7/27/2024 c67 Guest
What a fucking load of horse shit, he's told he can save everyone but isn't allowed to save his parents. Get fucked you piece if shit.
What a fucking load of horse shit, he's told he can save everyone but isn't allowed to save his parents. Get fucked you piece if shit.