for Post-Apocalyptic Potter from a Parallel Universe5/5/2022 c46 agnar
Just gotta say, while I have mostly enjoyed the fic, one part that strikes me as way ooc is tony Stark seemingly doing nearly everything on the space tech with magic. It just seems incredibly odd that, rather than seeing runes and enchantment as ways to enhance his own tech, he's gone for replacing his tech with magic.
He didn't use the new magic metals and runes and so on to allow him to make a better, stronger but more compact ARC reactor to power the giant ship, nope, let's use magic to power it. Magic that is entirely dependent upon Harry being available to power. It just feels false to me.
Just gotta say, while I have mostly enjoyed the fic, one part that strikes me as way ooc is tony Stark seemingly doing nearly everything on the space tech with magic. It just seems incredibly odd that, rather than seeing runes and enchantment as ways to enhance his own tech, he's gone for replacing his tech with magic.
He didn't use the new magic metals and runes and so on to allow him to make a better, stronger but more compact ARC reactor to power the giant ship, nope, let's use magic to power it. Magic that is entirely dependent upon Harry being available to power. It just feels false to me.
5/4/2022 c68 
9Zaidee Lighthart
It’s been a long time since you finished this and I was wondering if you think you might continue this into another world or not? Like how you suggested sending this Harry to DC. Not going to lie, part of me hopes you might continue this Harry. Of your stories this is my favourite Harry written by you. My second favourite is the SG-1 Harry but at the same time I hate how arrogant the SG-1 Harry is.
Anyway it was great rereading this and I know I say it every time, but thank you for writing your stories and sharing them with us.
9Zaidee LighthartIt’s been a long time since you finished this and I was wondering if you think you might continue this into another world or not? Like how you suggested sending this Harry to DC. Not going to lie, part of me hopes you might continue this Harry. Of your stories this is my favourite Harry written by you. My second favourite is the SG-1 Harry but at the same time I hate how arrogant the SG-1 Harry is.
Anyway it was great rereading this and I know I say it every time, but thank you for writing your stories and sharing them with us.
5/3/2022 c58 Incantations7
You have my sincere condolences for your loss…
I have no real idea what to say, since a life lost too soon is, in my opinion, a true crime, but I can only hope that she is looking at your journey in life still, and is proud of what you have done.
You have my sincere condolences for your loss…
I have no real idea what to say, since a life lost too soon is, in my opinion, a true crime, but I can only hope that she is looking at your journey in life still, and is proud of what you have done.
5/1/2022 c15 Sterling-Ag
the story can be really fun and engaging and then you have Harry amazing the asgardians with pizza and fire whiskey it's honestly taking down the story a couple of notches from a heroic emotional tell to something pretty banal however overall this is a good story
the story can be really fun and engaging and then you have Harry amazing the asgardians with pizza and fire whiskey it's honestly taking down the story a couple of notches from a heroic emotional tell to something pretty banal however overall this is a good story
5/1/2022 c5 Sterling-Ag
There are distinct differences between the word 'weary' and 'wary'. In a story that seems fairly well edited their improper usage stands out.
There are distinct differences between the word 'weary' and 'wary'. In a story that seems fairly well edited their improper usage stands out.
4/30/2022 c15 taxzombie
I should of posted a review earlier but I was enjoying the tale too much to stop. I truly enjoy a story that is both serious and humorous, which this story fits the bill most admirably. I got some good chuckles out of this chapter and I figured I owed you a Thank You for them, and for having taken the time and effort to but this most excellent tale together. Well done!
I should of posted a review earlier but I was enjoying the tale too much to stop. I truly enjoy a story that is both serious and humorous, which this story fits the bill most admirably. I got some good chuckles out of this chapter and I figured I owed you a Thank You for them, and for having taken the time and effort to but this most excellent tale together. Well done!
4/28/2022 c68 Royaussie
Wow wow, if your looking at the reviews to see if you should read this, how about, WOW WOW THIS WAS GREAT, so loved the story and your writing. I haven’t looked yet but hoping for Part 2. Understand if not as your life stage may need all your time. I wish you the best, and a few prays for your family.
Thank you
Wow wow, if your looking at the reviews to see if you should read this, how about, WOW WOW THIS WAS GREAT, so loved the story and your writing. I haven’t looked yet but hoping for Part 2. Understand if not as your life stage may need all your time. I wish you the best, and a few prays for your family.
Thank you
4/26/2022 c64 Royaussie
Wow, even more fantastic. If your reading my review. STOP, go to the start, READ THE WHOLE STORY AS ITS FANTASTIC.
So well done I love love love it.
Wow, even more fantastic. If your reading my review. STOP, go to the start, READ THE WHOLE STORY AS ITS FANTASTIC.
So well done I love love love it.
4/24/2022 c50 Royaussie
This is fantastic. I’ve been binging but it’s 5am so time for bed. This is such a massive story I wish it was without end. Love your writing. Thanks heaps
This is fantastic. I’ve been binging but it’s 5am so time for bed. This is such a massive story I wish it was without end. Love your writing. Thanks heaps
4/22/2022 c31 Royaussie
This is fantastic. I love it. I’m at the pub watching footie, but I’m actually reading your fantastic story. My mates keep asking what the hell im doing. I just can stop. Thanks so much for your massive story. Love your style and I find myself in your world and loving it.
This is fantastic. I love it. I’m at the pub watching footie, but I’m actually reading your fantastic story. My mates keep asking what the hell im doing. I just can stop. Thanks so much for your massive story. Love your style and I find myself in your world and loving it.
4/16/2022 c47 Vanthiyethevan
when exactly did natasha make out with xera? i am pretty sure that never happened...
when exactly did natasha make out with xera? i am pretty sure that never happened...
4/11/2022 c12 Guest
really? seriously!? harry just goes around telling his sob story to everyone ?
well... it's you're story so whatever. I am done following this one
really? seriously!? harry just goes around telling his sob story to everyone ?
well... it's you're story so whatever. I am done following this one