
12/8/2022 c21
6Blade8821
I've always admired your work, and strove to become half as good a writer as LOTLOF, but by god, I don't know if I'll ever top the last line of this chapter. This is incredibly well-written, and 110% accurate to the source material while telling its own alternate story with some of the best dialogue I've yet seen. I just hope to see more of it before too long.

I've always admired your work, and strove to become half as good a writer as LOTLOF, but by god, I don't know if I'll ever top the last line of this chapter. This is incredibly well-written, and 110% accurate to the source material while telling its own alternate story with some of the best dialogue I've yet seen. I just hope to see more of it before too long.
11/24/2022 c48 Warlocktoungue
So, pal I just need to know...
What's your plan for Kazuma and Darkness in this story?
Because for what I've read so far, those two may have a real thing going on there...
:D
So, pal I just need to know...
What's your plan for Kazuma and Darkness in this story?
Because for what I've read so far, those two may have a real thing going on there...
:D
11/19/2022 c21
2TigerCat
*rolls around cackling*
Obviously Darkness was going to be real, but the end bit where she took up offensive skills... *giggle*

*rolls around cackling*
Obviously Darkness was going to be real, but the end bit where she took up offensive skills... *giggle*
10/29/2022 c21 ShadowLightning1
This is a really well written funny chapter. Everything from the set up to execution to pay off was perfect
This is a really well written funny chapter. Everything from the set up to execution to pay off was perfect
10/22/2022 c1
13Iron M. Writer
Kazuma is an ass at times but he is a good person in his heart. but this Kazuma is An asshole coated ass with ass filling

Kazuma is an ass at times but he is a good person in his heart. but this Kazuma is An asshole coated ass with ass filling
10/19/2022 c48 StelthStriker786
Hey, your story here has been pretty good so far, but I kind of read it before any other konosuba fanfic here. And now I hate Aqua. This is your fault XD. Can you maybe make her have SOME redeemable qualities? Please? For the sake of your readers enjoying other fics again?
Hey, your story here has been pretty good so far, but I kind of read it before any other konosuba fanfic here. And now I hate Aqua. This is your fault XD. Can you maybe make her have SOME redeemable qualities? Please? For the sake of your readers enjoying other fics again?
9/22/2022 c48 Mol
This... would be a very Kazuma thing to do. Cheers!
This... would be a very Kazuma thing to do. Cheers!
9/20/2022 c47 Conan.212
Kazuma wants to kick Megumin out of the group?
Now its oficial: Hes an asshole.
I miss the justice in this story.
Kazuma wants to kick Megumin out of the group?
Now its oficial: Hes an asshole.
I miss the justice in this story.