
12/18/2021 c22
4Lone Fire
Great chapter can't wait to see if greyson is snitching on them
And Humphreys friends found him on the ground thats going to be a interesting conversation

Great chapter can't wait to see if greyson is snitching on them
And Humphreys friends found him on the ground thats going to be a interesting conversation
11/23/2021 c21 Lone Fire
This chapter was great I can't wait for the next chapter! and they gotta worry about greyson snooping around too. I rate this chapter 10/10
This chapter was great I can't wait for the next chapter! and they gotta worry about greyson snooping around too. I rate this chapter 10/10
9/10/2021 c18
3TheGreatWolfGod1234
love this story, keep on writing you're like one of the best fanfic writers ever

love this story, keep on writing you're like one of the best fanfic writers ever
9/9/2021 c18
4Lone Fire
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next now that greyson is snooping around! 5/5

Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next now that greyson is snooping around! 5/5
8/22/2021 c16 Lone Fire
Great story! at first I was skeptical about the idea for the story line, but as I started reading, the plot was well written and very creative along with a few twist that keeps you guessing like when they went back to jasper I thought they would abolish both laws (because most fanfic storys would take that route but u didn't and it left more room for you too expand on the story) and it was a nice twist in the story! Overall I rate this one a 4/5 stars! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work !
Great story! at first I was skeptical about the idea for the story line, but as I started reading, the plot was well written and very creative along with a few twist that keeps you guessing like when they went back to jasper I thought they would abolish both laws (because most fanfic storys would take that route but u didn't and it left more room for you too expand on the story) and it was a nice twist in the story! Overall I rate this one a 4/5 stars! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work !
7/21/2021 c16 Sasha Arctic Night
Love the story so far, got a little confused with Humphrey being an Omicron but I know its something that defines the story more as yours, I mean if Humphrey having five mates that are quintuplets doesn't already cause the story to stand out from others in a good way I assure from my prospective. I love how cute they all are together the cuteness and fluff is a definite weak spot for me and I love the little teasings here and there. Hoping to see more chapters of this as I will look forward to reading them if you release more.
Thank you for the good read and pleasant distraction from my life.
Love the story so far, got a little confused with Humphrey being an Omicron but I know its something that defines the story more as yours, I mean if Humphrey having five mates that are quintuplets doesn't already cause the story to stand out from others in a good way I assure from my prospective. I love how cute they all are together the cuteness and fluff is a definite weak spot for me and I love the little teasings here and there. Hoping to see more chapters of this as I will look forward to reading them if you release more.
Thank you for the good read and pleasant distraction from my life.
1/9/2021 c13 Guest
Update pls
Update pls