for Zabaniya: A Delusional Romance Between Assassin and Wizard8/16/2019 c12 BorderLand
To be frank I don't see why Harry would have any problem with being a Heroic Spirit considering that he is surrounded by them and he dates one. As a human he would have been dead in a hundred years taking in consideration that he is a wizard and he would have aged like any human but now as a Heroic Spirit he is pretty much immortal and with the potential to become very strong.
This chapter was great, I could feel the suspense and the way you revealed the big secret was awesome.
To be frank I don't see why Harry would have any problem with being a Heroic Spirit considering that he is surrounded by them and he dates one. As a human he would have been dead in a hundred years taking in consideration that he is a wizard and he would have aged like any human but now as a Heroic Spirit he is pretty much immortal and with the potential to become very strong.
This chapter was great, I could feel the suspense and the way you revealed the big secret was awesome.
8/16/2019 c12 
5RaidenSilversword
The world needs more Wholesome TIAMOMMY stuff, especially if you dig more into the Fate lore for her, outside of the game. You learn things like even WITHOUT her "Restraining Bolt" of Femme Fatale form, she won't use her full power to wipe out Humanity, not to mention the closer to the land she gets, the WEAKER she gets as a result of the above.
She is, in essence, the embodiment of Matricide; Humanity learned to live outside of her womb, and you have to stop her putting you back in. By the same score, all she wants, isn't to end all life, but to be the Primordial Progenitor again, and be MOMMY to a planet of life. By far, an unusual and sympathetic enemy. Of course, the fear of her, goes both ways... "To humans, Beast II is a horrifying invader, but to Beast II, humans are frightening aliens."
All that aside, great work as always. I hope to read more in the future, as well as potentially the possible story with TIAMOMMY.
5RaidenSilverswordThe world needs more Wholesome TIAMOMMY stuff, especially if you dig more into the Fate lore for her, outside of the game. You learn things like even WITHOUT her "Restraining Bolt" of Femme Fatale form, she won't use her full power to wipe out Humanity, not to mention the closer to the land she gets, the WEAKER she gets as a result of the above.
She is, in essence, the embodiment of Matricide; Humanity learned to live outside of her womb, and you have to stop her putting you back in. By the same score, all she wants, isn't to end all life, but to be the Primordial Progenitor again, and be MOMMY to a planet of life. By far, an unusual and sympathetic enemy. Of course, the fear of her, goes both ways... "To humans, Beast II is a horrifying invader, but to Beast II, humans are frightening aliens."
All that aside, great work as always. I hope to read more in the future, as well as potentially the possible story with TIAMOMMY.
8/16/2019 c12 3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
Dun dun dun dun dun! The truth is revealed! Loved the chapter, thanks. You really tugged at my heartstrings with the Tiamat bit. Will she come back, or is she truly dead here? For example, Kiara can be summoned as a Servant.
3Acolyte of the Blood MoonDun dun dun dun dun! The truth is revealed! Loved the chapter, thanks. You really tugged at my heartstrings with the Tiamat bit. Will she come back, or is she truly dead here? For example, Kiara can be summoned as a Servant.
8/16/2019 c12 11Gabriel Herrol
So...Harry died during the transit in between Little Hangleton and the Camelot Singularity and he somehow made it to the Throne quickly and summoned himself back into his dying body with human wizard's power levels?
11Gabriel HerrolSo...Harry died during the transit in between Little Hangleton and the Camelot Singularity and he somehow made it to the Throne quickly and summoned himself back into his dying body with human wizard's power levels?
8/16/2019 c12 1Jack54311
While I, and many others, were right about Harry effectively being a pseodo-servant, it still doesn't explain why Harry is completely immune to Serenity's poison. Her noble phantasm is literally her poisoned body. It affects enemy servants. So why should Harry be immune? Does he have poison resistance, perhaps similar to Mash/Galahad? Perhaps the basilisk venom and the phoenix tears played a part in forming his legend, and included themselves in his saint graph somehow to make him effectively immune?
On another note, it would be interesting to see a Tiamat pairing. I saw a story where someone summons her as a servant, but it was sadly left abandoned.
1Jack54311While I, and many others, were right about Harry effectively being a pseodo-servant, it still doesn't explain why Harry is completely immune to Serenity's poison. Her noble phantasm is literally her poisoned body. It affects enemy servants. So why should Harry be immune? Does he have poison resistance, perhaps similar to Mash/Galahad? Perhaps the basilisk venom and the phoenix tears played a part in forming his legend, and included themselves in his saint graph somehow to make him effectively immune?
On another note, it would be interesting to see a Tiamat pairing. I saw a story where someone summons her as a servant, but it was sadly left abandoned.
8/16/2019 c12 3MWkillkenny84
Thanks for the reply.
And yes, it could have been intersting to see the Tiamat situation resolved not by force, but by diplomacy...
Vote: 10
3MWkillkenny84Thanks for the reply.
And yes, it could have been intersting to see the Tiamat situation resolved not by force, but by diplomacy...
Vote: 10
8/16/2019 c12 1Pbc98
I like that you put harry having trauma from babylonia, its something i honestly thought that ritsuka would deal with more often than what ive seen so far
1Pbc98I like that you put harry having trauma from babylonia, its something i honestly thought that ritsuka would deal with more often than what ive seen so far
8/16/2019 c11 1Jack54311
Following in the hopes that you are continuing this. It's pretty good. I have a couple of ideas on what may have happened to Harry, but I'll wait and see. Hopefully. As a big fan of Fragments of Chaldea, I actually caught all of the references, as well as noting some key differences. Good work so far, I hope to see more. I do hope to see some of the others reacting to seeing King Hassan, though. Just a request.
1Jack54311Following in the hopes that you are continuing this. It's pretty good. I have a couple of ideas on what may have happened to Harry, but I'll wait and see. Hopefully. As a big fan of Fragments of Chaldea, I actually caught all of the references, as well as noting some key differences. Good work so far, I hope to see more. I do hope to see some of the others reacting to seeing King Hassan, though. Just a request.
7/19/2019 c6 StarkillerRicardos
Really enjoying this so far,so Sirius summoned Edmond another innocent man that was sent to an infamous island prison without a trial,that fits so perfectly
Really enjoying this so far,so Sirius summoned Edmond another innocent man that was sent to an infamous island prison without a trial,that fits so perfectly
7/17/2019 c11 Skull Flame
- I didn't know Charlemagne was also called Karl Magnus Rex. The more you know.
- So there truly is an impostor of Dumbledore in Hogwarts, and has the real version of Charlemagne as a Servant, in contrast to Dumbledore, who has the romantic version, so to say.
- I didn't expect to see Dumbledore so... defeated. Truly, past actions and life have taken a toll on him.
- Wait, now that I think about it, they mentioned that Grindlewald escaped Nurmengard with a Servant. After thinking about it, I have the impression that Grindlewald could be the false Dumbledore. I could be wrong, though.
- Harry has a secret that, if revealed the wrong way, could drive him to existencial angst. Intriguing.
- I didn't know Charlemagne was also called Karl Magnus Rex. The more you know.
- So there truly is an impostor of Dumbledore in Hogwarts, and has the real version of Charlemagne as a Servant, in contrast to Dumbledore, who has the romantic version, so to say.
- I didn't expect to see Dumbledore so... defeated. Truly, past actions and life have taken a toll on him.
- Wait, now that I think about it, they mentioned that Grindlewald escaped Nurmengard with a Servant. After thinking about it, I have the impression that Grindlewald could be the false Dumbledore. I could be wrong, though.
- Harry has a secret that, if revealed the wrong way, could drive him to existencial angst. Intriguing.
7/17/2019 c11 3MWkillkenny84
Good chapter.
A question: is Zealot/Beautiful Assassin ever get to appear... or be mentioned?
3MWkillkenny84Good chapter.
A question: is Zealot/Beautiful Assassin ever get to appear... or be mentioned?
7/17/2019 c11 BorderLand
So I am guessing that Harry blew a hole trough the throne of heroes and all the way to the singularity becoming a servant in the process? Some kind of grand Ruler?
Or even better a phantasmal beast...yep I am so looking forward to the big reveal.
So I am guessing that Harry blew a hole trough the throne of heroes and all the way to the singularity becoming a servant in the process? Some kind of grand Ruler?
Or even better a phantasmal beast...yep I am so looking forward to the big reveal.