for Children of Circumstance5/11/2006 c1 GoddessAnjanee
You are definitely off to a good start. Your plot is very clear. The story is easy to follow.
Keep up the excellent work !
You are definitely off to a good start. Your plot is very clear. The story is easy to follow.
Keep up the excellent work !
5/9/2006 c3 Hikari
bwa! i gotta kow what happens next! ^_^' pleaz update soon and tell me! i love the plotby the way, its very unique and original... keep writing ^_^
~HIKARi
bwa! i gotta kow what happens next! ^_^' pleaz update soon and tell me! i love the plotby the way, its very unique and original... keep writing ^_^
~HIKARi
8/5/2003 c2 
5Raptor - X1
great, chapter 2 is just as good as chapter one; but I think you had janeway jump in to accusing her too quickly.
5Raptor - X1great, chapter 2 is just as good as chapter one; but I think you had janeway jump in to accusing her too quickly.
6/17/2003 c3 LOTUSNEKO
Great content and progress in the story, but a little sloppy with the writing. It was a little confusing; I had to read it twice. One spelling error - "one side affect" should be "effect." This chap could also use a little more description. Still, very original and imaginative, and I look forward eagerly to the next chappies.
Great content and progress in the story, but a little sloppy with the writing. It was a little confusing; I had to read it twice. One spelling error - "one side affect" should be "effect." This chap could also use a little more description. Still, very original and imaginative, and I look forward eagerly to the next chappies.
6/17/2003 c3 12Slim Dim
This is realy good, I like the idea of the borg DNA, the description of the borg "voice" and the refrenses to other ST:V episodes.
Pleas continue.
12Slim DimThis is realy good, I like the idea of the borg DNA, the description of the borg "voice" and the refrenses to other ST:V episodes.
Pleas continue.
5/19/2003 c1 LOTUSNEKO
Antiope, "Children of Circumstance" is a great story. I recently read a Voyager novel, and the quality of your writing here is honestly on par with the book. The plot of the four young female Borg rebels is original and intriguing. You use ST terminology accurately, which is not easy to do.
Antiope, "Children of Circumstance" is a great story. I recently read a Voyager novel, and the quality of your writing here is honestly on par with the book. The plot of the four young female Borg rebels is original and intriguing. You use ST terminology accurately, which is not easy to do.
5/19/2003 c2 9Frek
I'm really glad you decided to continue this story! I like the direction you're going in, and I'm definately curious about the weird Borg-ish DNA. Keep up the good work!
The One and Only
Frek
9FrekI'm really glad you decided to continue this story! I like the direction you're going in, and I'm definately curious about the weird Borg-ish DNA. Keep up the good work!
The One and Only
Frek
5/6/2003 c1 9Frek
Nice beginning, I really loved the concept of the borg kids, and I'm glad that someone else is taking it in a new direction. You might want to reread this and give it a little bit of a revise, there are a few places that might need some tweeking, but darn good besides that. Hey thanks for the fic, can't wait for more!
The One and Only
Frek
9FrekNice beginning, I really loved the concept of the borg kids, and I'm glad that someone else is taking it in a new direction. You might want to reread this and give it a little bit of a revise, there are a few places that might need some tweeking, but darn good besides that. Hey thanks for the fic, can't wait for more!
The One and Only
Frek
5/5/2003 c1 Little
you've got my interest. I'm curious about who the kids are and where you're taking this story. especially since you're putting it right agter Dark Frontier. I'll keep an eager eye out for the next chapter.
you've got my interest. I'm curious about who the kids are and where you're taking this story. especially since you're putting it right agter Dark Frontier. I'll keep an eager eye out for the next chapter.