for Forks Valley HOA11/23/2020 c1 southerencuttie23
This was so cute. I hate o/s because most of the time it leaves so much unanswered but this was perfect.
This was so cute. I hate o/s because most of the time it leaves so much unanswered but this was perfect.
10/29/2020 c1 
1morena.davidson.3
I love Manchu! I love this story too. I'd love if you continued it too. Lots of love here. :) Thanks for sharing. xo
1morena.davidson.3I love Manchu! I love this story too. I'd love if you continued it too. Lots of love here. :) Thanks for sharing. xo
5/2/2020 c1 twibrarian88
What a cute story! Thanks for sharing. I'm going to go read the sequel now.
- Deb VanAntwerp
What a cute story! Thanks for sharing. I'm going to go read the sequel now.
- Deb VanAntwerp
3/2/2020 c1 ChristyWIX
I somehow missed this one last year when you published it. I am certainly glad I saw that you were posting the sequel, which made me come find this one. I very much enjoyed it. Bella is more than a little high strung. However, I think the previously regimented, yet now more free, Edward will help her navigate a balance that works well. He was downright mean when he came to her house while she was gardening. At least he apologized. And, it did make her rethink how she was running the neighborhood. Opening her eyes to how said neighbors really didn't care for her at all. Yes, I think the balance will be very good. Very funny at parts. Emmett was quite fun to read. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX
I somehow missed this one last year when you published it. I am certainly glad I saw that you were posting the sequel, which made me come find this one. I very much enjoyed it. Bella is more than a little high strung. However, I think the previously regimented, yet now more free, Edward will help her navigate a balance that works well. He was downright mean when he came to her house while she was gardening. At least he apologized. And, it did make her rethink how she was running the neighborhood. Opening her eyes to how said neighbors really didn't care for her at all. Yes, I think the balance will be very good. Very funny at parts. Emmett was quite fun to read. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here. ~ChristyWIX
1/6/2020 c1 grandmachix
I saw your BWOB submission and had to read this before I read that. Bella does need to loosen up some.
Judy
I saw your BWOB submission and had to read this before I read that. Bella does need to loosen up some.
Judy
7/24/2019 c1 88TwiGeek
Loved your story! You made the characters feel so real. Looking forward to more from you.
Loved your story! You made the characters feel so real. Looking forward to more from you.
7/23/2019 c1 jackiehydelover
This was one of my favorites from the contest. Would love a follow up chapter of maybe even a multi-chapter story.
This was one of my favorites from the contest. Would love a follow up chapter of maybe even a multi-chapter story.