for The Serpent and Her Lion4/2/2020 c24 Guest
Lion? Hell no. Harry is a weak fool. I'm done with this waste of time.
Lion? Hell no. Harry is a weak fool. I'm done with this waste of time.
4/1/2020 c26 noice
nice
nice
3/31/2020 c26 
2mooliberry
Wow, this is amazing. I’m glad I found it as it was completed, such a good ride. It’s not often you come across a fic as well written as this - the plot, subplots, characters, everything. I’m glad I opened it up, well worth the sleep I lost to reading it!
2mooliberryWow, this is amazing. I’m glad I found it as it was completed, such a good ride. It’s not often you come across a fic as well written as this - the plot, subplots, characters, everything. I’m glad I opened it up, well worth the sleep I lost to reading it!
3/31/2020 c26 1AriomAlucard
Thank you very much for such a good read. I've started to absolutely love Daphne as a character and I'm so glad you wrote this, it inspired me to move Daphne from an important side character in my fanfic, to a main character. I have to rewrite some things but she is one of my favorites thanks to you and Harry Potter and the Daft Morons.
1AriomAlucardThank you very much for such a good read. I've started to absolutely love Daphne as a character and I'm so glad you wrote this, it inspired me to move Daphne from an important side character in my fanfic, to a main character. I have to rewrite some things but she is one of my favorites thanks to you and Harry Potter and the Daft Morons.
3/31/2020 c26 BillBrink
Nicely done Jon. I enjoyed every chapter. I was a little surprised you finished it here, but it works. Guess you will do a sequel? In any case, thank you for sharing it.
Nicely done Jon. I enjoyed every chapter. I was a little surprised you finished it here, but it works. Guess you will do a sequel? In any case, thank you for sharing it.
3/31/2020 c26 Just Me
I found this story the other day and read through it in like 2 days. I loved it! It was awesome and well written! Please start the next part in the series soon! I look forward to having my thoughts about Johns hair confirmed (or not)!
I found this story the other day and read through it in like 2 days. I loved it! It was awesome and well written! Please start the next part in the series soon! I look forward to having my thoughts about Johns hair confirmed (or not)!
3/31/2020 c26 7goldfish demon
I happened upon this story one day while browsing at work right after you posted the first chapter and I've been following it ever since. I just completed my second read and I must say, it is wall to wall awesome. Went in a few different directions than I thought it might, especially the slight hiccup with Astoria, but overall I really, really liked it.
After going through it the second time, something that struck me as odd was the whole "Top Snake" thing that goes around in the earlier chapters. I get that the Malfoy family is a big deal, but are we really expected to believe that the 5th, 6th and 7th years all bow down to a 4th year as the Head of Slytherin?
7goldfish demonI happened upon this story one day while browsing at work right after you posted the first chapter and I've been following it ever since. I just completed my second read and I must say, it is wall to wall awesome. Went in a few different directions than I thought it might, especially the slight hiccup with Astoria, but overall I really, really liked it.
After going through it the second time, something that struck me as odd was the whole "Top Snake" thing that goes around in the earlier chapters. I get that the Malfoy family is a big deal, but are we really expected to believe that the 5th, 6th and 7th years all bow down to a 4th year as the Head of Slytherin?
3/31/2020 c10 Alphros
You can't send people off the pitch in Quidditch. We're told that in Philosopher's Stone.
You can't send people off the pitch in Quidditch. We're told that in Philosopher's Stone.
3/29/2020 c26 skifast
God I love to hate when I read a whole story in under a day cant wait for the next ones
God I love to hate when I read a whole story in under a day cant wait for the next ones
3/29/2020 c21 Djtiger901
I think that is a great portrayal of Dumbledore. he wasn't evil or senile, he just needed a kick in the ass.
I think that is a great portrayal of Dumbledore. he wasn't evil or senile, he just needed a kick in the ass.
3/29/2020 c26 Ms-Fleur
Really enjoyed this story, can't wait for the next part. Question: John hair has changed to black, Hannah looked nervoud which Hermione picked up on, don't tell me that John dad is Sirus. I am guess Hannah was preganant when she married Joseph and realised she was pregnant and she disguised John to hide his parentage.
Anyway, not sure how I feel because, Sirus main priority is Harry. John being Sirus son, I get the feeling this will cause Harry jealous feelings as John gets to have both his parents. Anyway, look forward to the next.
Really enjoyed this story, can't wait for the next part. Question: John hair has changed to black, Hannah looked nervoud which Hermione picked up on, don't tell me that John dad is Sirus. I am guess Hannah was preganant when she married Joseph and realised she was pregnant and she disguised John to hide his parentage.
Anyway, not sure how I feel because, Sirus main priority is Harry. John being Sirus son, I get the feeling this will cause Harry jealous feelings as John gets to have both his parents. Anyway, look forward to the next.
3/29/2020 c3 3Demonic Pride Dragon
“WOAH BLACK BETTY BAM-A-LAM. SHE'S FROM BIRMINGHAM." The music blasted. America was here, and they didn't care who knew it.
This story is great, but this sentence made it awesome lmfao! I’m American so I can say that is something we would totally do.
3Demonic Pride Dragon“WOAH BLACK BETTY BAM-A-LAM. SHE'S FROM BIRMINGHAM." The music blasted. America was here, and they didn't care who knew it.
This story is great, but this sentence made it awesome lmfao! I’m American so I can say that is something we would totally do.