
10/29/2022 c4 Phazer12
A terminator, a Merlin damned Magical Terminator. Wow. Very very curious to see if they are the Nicholas Flamel and wife or maybe their children!
A terminator, a Merlin damned Magical Terminator. Wow. Very very curious to see if they are the Nicholas Flamel and wife or maybe their children!
10/28/2022 c15
1Celexs Draconia
This is such an intense story, I really enjoy the way its heading and look forward to the next installment.
Cel

This is such an intense story, I really enjoy the way its heading and look forward to the next installment.
Cel
10/22/2022 c15 Gazuzin
Woah, this fic is incredible, if only Dumble had acted with half of this Harry's determination. Anyways, loved the apparition car trap, and the use of the Stone. I expect great things of you author, terrible but great. Thanks for writing
Woah, this fic is incredible, if only Dumble had acted with half of this Harry's determination. Anyways, loved the apparition car trap, and the use of the Stone. I expect great things of you author, terrible but great. Thanks for writing
10/22/2022 c6 omes848484
cant believe people pay this guy to write. story is shite.
decent concept, but crappie execution.
cant believe people pay this guy to write. story is shite.
decent concept, but crappie execution.
10/19/2022 c14 TheGreatBubbaJ
Really adapting to the 'lord' bit innit? So the lad will have functional innards but all his outards will be blackened rot forevermore eh?
Really adapting to the 'lord' bit innit? So the lad will have functional innards but all his outards will be blackened rot forevermore eh?
10/19/2022 c13 TheGreatBubbaJ
Bit late to make the call, but as long as MOM can't lung jack him, I'd say mecha lungs. Let the lad get a bit of flavor from every angle of staving off death.
Bit late to make the call, but as long as MOM can't lung jack him, I'd say mecha lungs. Let the lad get a bit of flavor from every angle of staving off death.
10/19/2022 c12 TheGreatBubbaJ
Man the lad's enemies got dunked on, though more trouble here may have been a greater mercy than the new player in the game.
Man the lad's enemies got dunked on, though more trouble here may have been a greater mercy than the new player in the game.
10/19/2022 c11 TheGreatBubbaJ
Guess we've discovered where the machine and flesh monsters from the dreams of dudders came from. Forgot to mention it last chapter, funny how Jessica is treading the same ground as another writing focused horcrux. Wonder if this one will have a different end.
Guess we've discovered where the machine and flesh monsters from the dreams of dudders came from. Forgot to mention it last chapter, funny how Jessica is treading the same ground as another writing focused horcrux. Wonder if this one will have a different end.
10/19/2022 c10 TheGreatBubbaJ
Makes more sense than pure dickishness, but still certainly a different lad.
Makes more sense than pure dickishness, but still certainly a different lad.
10/19/2022 c6 TheGreatBubbaJ
Interesting to see the shades interacting, and that you haven't gone the route most go (when they use the shades anyways) and have them constantly try to get the lad to off himself.
Interesting to see the shades interacting, and that you haven't gone the route most go (when they use the shades anyways) and have them constantly try to get the lad to off himself.