
10/19/2022 c5
1TheGreatBubbaJ
Really living up to the horror side, I like it. Nice touch with Yaxely just being horny for chaos in general.

Really living up to the horror side, I like it. Nice touch with Yaxely just being horny for chaos in general.
10/19/2022 c4 TheGreatBubbaJ
Ah and now the Flamels come into play. The lad is having quite the night.
Ah and now the Flamels come into play. The lad is having quite the night.
10/19/2022 c2 TheGreatBubbaJ
Hell of another development. Nice touch with the snitch being combat capable.
Hell of another development. Nice touch with the snitch being combat capable.
9/29/2022 c15 jorioevil
First time actually reading a dark harry who becomes a leader and it's not full of teenage angst, unnecessary drama and edginess. Kudos to you, thanks for sharing your story.
First time actually reading a dark harry who becomes a leader and it's not full of teenage angst, unnecessary drama and edginess. Kudos to you, thanks for sharing your story.
8/7/2022 c1 ALLHEAVEN2
Great chapter as always.
Is he going to rebuild his body at some point? Artificial enhancement just seems so disappointing a solution in a universe where spiritual and biological beings can grow so powerful. The advantage of a natural body capable of growth and to always be the most suitable vessel for the soul is not something I would so readily abandon. Not to mention that the creation of the perfect being has been mentioned before, even while still remaining a wizard I am sure he can find plenty of inspiration when it comes to the re-making of his body.
Btw the trinity described was absolutely awesome, I was not expecting that. Very well done. Hope we'll get to see those who would call themselves their equal as well at some point, as foes preferably but at this point I'll take anything. Keep it up mate. And thank you for your hard work.
Great chapter as always.
Is he going to rebuild his body at some point? Artificial enhancement just seems so disappointing a solution in a universe where spiritual and biological beings can grow so powerful. The advantage of a natural body capable of growth and to always be the most suitable vessel for the soul is not something I would so readily abandon. Not to mention that the creation of the perfect being has been mentioned before, even while still remaining a wizard I am sure he can find plenty of inspiration when it comes to the re-making of his body.
Btw the trinity described was absolutely awesome, I was not expecting that. Very well done. Hope we'll get to see those who would call themselves their equal as well at some point, as foes preferably but at this point I'll take anything. Keep it up mate. And thank you for your hard work.
8/7/2022 c3 TheNeedle
I don’t think I saw anyone point this out. But why would a British family, celebrate Thanksgiving? Is just silly and completely sticks out to me. Other then that great story so far.
I don’t think I saw anyone point this out. But why would a British family, celebrate Thanksgiving? Is just silly and completely sticks out to me. Other then that great story so far.
7/15/2022 c13 Spacestrider
Personally I'd lean a bit more into the undead theme than another Darth Vader. You also keep suggesting Harry will be worse than Voldemort but even after being forced to make a horcrux he still seems mostly aimed in the right direction if efficiently brutal. I can't see any reason Harry would make more and as long as he keeps his other half close he could be mostly ok. To be honest I'm not really interested in a more evil than Voldemort Harry Potter. That doesn't mean he is ok or couldn't end up causing more amounts of death than Voldemort. Just intentions have to be mostly good. I also don't really like this talk of necromancy being unnatural I preferred it that the ministry was just suppressing the populace and some of magic's stronger abilities. Death is a part of life. And you made it seem like some people are naturally inclined towards the art. As far as the horcrux formation goes the eating oneself and killing another does seem very symbolic the only one even more fitting would be eating one's own reproductive organs thus permanently taking oneself out of the circle of life.
Personally I'd lean a bit more into the undead theme than another Darth Vader. You also keep suggesting Harry will be worse than Voldemort but even after being forced to make a horcrux he still seems mostly aimed in the right direction if efficiently brutal. I can't see any reason Harry would make more and as long as he keeps his other half close he could be mostly ok. To be honest I'm not really interested in a more evil than Voldemort Harry Potter. That doesn't mean he is ok or couldn't end up causing more amounts of death than Voldemort. Just intentions have to be mostly good. I also don't really like this talk of necromancy being unnatural I preferred it that the ministry was just suppressing the populace and some of magic's stronger abilities. Death is a part of life. And you made it seem like some people are naturally inclined towards the art. As far as the horcrux formation goes the eating oneself and killing another does seem very symbolic the only one even more fitting would be eating one's own reproductive organs thus permanently taking oneself out of the circle of life.
7/15/2022 c13 Guest
Transplant!
Transplant!
6/11/2022 c14 Guest
Crazydude13
I remember reading the first chapter and loving it, still do, really surprised to see that this hasn’t blown up yet. It’s a Dark Harry, but really well written w/ clever AU elements. Anyways, keep up the great work! And o think ima vote for the lung transplant, can’t wait to see what happens between Riddle and Harry.
Crazydude13
I remember reading the first chapter and loving it, still do, really surprised to see that this hasn’t blown up yet. It’s a Dark Harry, but really well written w/ clever AU elements. Anyways, keep up the great work! And o think ima vote for the lung transplant, can’t wait to see what happens between Riddle and Harry.
6/10/2022 c14
1SentinalSlice
He should go for a transplant but modify it. Maybe enchant the lungs with some runes that make them bigger on the inside. So he can hold his breath for longer.

He should go for a transplant but modify it. Maybe enchant the lungs with some runes that make them bigger on the inside. So he can hold his breath for longer.