for Harry Potter's Dark Life5/26/2023 c10 Guest
when will the next update be? Is it abandoned? or on hiatus?
when will the next update be? Is it abandoned? or on hiatus?
9/29/2019 c10 Guest
Espero que continúes con la historia y actualices pronto gracias
Espero que continúes con la historia y actualices pronto gracias
9/24/2019 c8 
1Calmzone1
Sorry, but I find polls and requests frustrating. I wish people would just put the terms together on a piece of pap and throw a dart, flip a coin, or actually plot out how each of the possibilities will play out and choose one yourself. Sorry, just a personal belief that this is your story, be happy wth your choices. Ignore what people say about the storyline unless it is constructive suggestions that will actually help you grow as a writer. Don’t make beta readers do everything for you. That is not the job of a beta reader, it is to read over your story and find continuity errors and such and help your story be stronger. They are not meant to be a line editor and fix all of a writer’s errors. But somehow fanfics have facilitated this belief. If work goes to a publishing house, most editors have a 5 strike rule ‘no matter how good the story, they send it to the reject pile when there are 5 you are lucky, they might give you improvement suggestions.’ Just as an fyi. :)
1Calmzone1Sorry, but I find polls and requests frustrating. I wish people would just put the terms together on a piece of pap and throw a dart, flip a coin, or actually plot out how each of the possibilities will play out and choose one yourself. Sorry, just a personal belief that this is your story, be happy wth your choices. Ignore what people say about the storyline unless it is constructive suggestions that will actually help you grow as a writer. Don’t make beta readers do everything for you. That is not the job of a beta reader, it is to read over your story and find continuity errors and such and help your story be stronger. They are not meant to be a line editor and fix all of a writer’s errors. But somehow fanfics have facilitated this belief. If work goes to a publishing house, most editors have a 5 strike rule ‘no matter how good the story, they send it to the reject pile when there are 5 you are lucky, they might give you improvement suggestions.’ Just as an fyi. :)
9/24/2019 c7 Calmzone1
Oops, you sorted Hermione Ravenclaw, yet Gryffindor and Slytherin entered the classroom. It would be funny if you have Hermione bolting out the door because she realizes she’s in the incorrect class and is now late for her own. :)
Oops, you sorted Hermione Ravenclaw, yet Gryffindor and Slytherin entered the classroom. It would be funny if you have Hermione bolting out the door because she realizes she’s in the incorrect class and is now late for her own. :)