3/18/2023 c2 Ltbutterfly287
I wish this site allowed multiple reviews on one chapter or at least the ability to edit the first one. But for chapter 3 for starters there is more to a sword fight the feints, strikes, parry’s, and dodging. You need to remember that Percy on his first day of sword training was taught a disarming skill. Percy is more then capable of disarming any opponent he faces. It’s also disappointing that you really did make Percy no better then your average human, to go from reading blows with giants and titans to not being able to overpower a normal human is stupid. Also the idea that anyone is actually skilled enough to give Percy a challenge is even more stupid. Quite literally the only person who could do that is Jamie Lannister but even then it wouldn’t be significant, no mortal is going to be a bigger challenge or even come close to anything he’s ever fought. Lastly I would just like to point out that you don’t seem to understand how knighting works, a lord can’t knight people. Only another knight can knight you, and no knights exist in the north because that whole system is religious in nature and belongs to a different faith.
I wish this site allowed multiple reviews on one chapter or at least the ability to edit the first one. But for chapter 3 for starters there is more to a sword fight the feints, strikes, parry’s, and dodging. You need to remember that Percy on his first day of sword training was taught a disarming skill. Percy is more then capable of disarming any opponent he faces. It’s also disappointing that you really did make Percy no better then your average human, to go from reading blows with giants and titans to not being able to overpower a normal human is stupid. Also the idea that anyone is actually skilled enough to give Percy a challenge is even more stupid. Quite literally the only person who could do that is Jamie Lannister but even then it wouldn’t be significant, no mortal is going to be a bigger challenge or even come close to anything he’s ever fought. Lastly I would just like to point out that you don’t seem to understand how knighting works, a lord can’t knight people. Only another knight can knight you, and no knights exist in the north because that whole system is religious in nature and belongs to a different faith.
3/18/2023 c3 Ltbutterfly287
I am genuinely disappointed that you chose to nerf Percy to such a ridiculous degree that his water control is nearly useless. Seriously it makes no sense to do so and really defeats the purpose of these stories cause what’s the point in a character from another universe if one of their biggest advantages is taken from them. I really hope it’s not a permanent issue cause if all he has at his disposal is his sword skills then he could very well die, he’s better then anyone in planetos but in a battlefield it’s less helpful. Lastly I hope you still make him super strong cause Percy is a unit in strength. He can trade blows with titans and giants and not be pushed back, at thirteen he punched ploympheus which is a hundred foot tall Cyclopes and the Cyclopes got staggered from it. In terms of strength there shouldn’t be anything on planetos that can take a blow from him.
I am genuinely disappointed that you chose to nerf Percy to such a ridiculous degree that his water control is nearly useless. Seriously it makes no sense to do so and really defeats the purpose of these stories cause what’s the point in a character from another universe if one of their biggest advantages is taken from them. I really hope it’s not a permanent issue cause if all he has at his disposal is his sword skills then he could very well die, he’s better then anyone in planetos but in a battlefield it’s less helpful. Lastly I hope you still make him super strong cause Percy is a unit in strength. He can trade blows with titans and giants and not be pushed back, at thirteen he punched ploympheus which is a hundred foot tall Cyclopes and the Cyclopes got staggered from it. In terms of strength there shouldn’t be anything on planetos that can take a blow from him.
2/28/2023 c2 namer1
Nice chapter, I can’t really remember how the first version started, but having Percy easily beat giants and then blesses by gods and gifted weapon that can kill anything, makes the rest of the story whenever he would struggle a bit unbelievable, because from what I remember of the show (haven’t read the books) the night king wasn’t all that impressive.
Personally I’m also not a fan of stories involving chaos, but that’s a just a personal quirk. It’s going to be interesting to see what Percy will do and how he will navigate Westeros.
Nice chapter, I can’t really remember how the first version started, but having Percy easily beat giants and then blesses by gods and gifted weapon that can kill anything, makes the rest of the story whenever he would struggle a bit unbelievable, because from what I remember of the show (haven’t read the books) the night king wasn’t all that impressive.
Personally I’m also not a fan of stories involving chaos, but that’s a just a personal quirk. It’s going to be interesting to see what Percy will do and how he will navigate Westeros.
2/25/2023 c2 Guest
Don’t get how Percy is weak against Polybotes when he beat him in a 1v1 the first time
Don’t get how Percy is weak against Polybotes when he beat him in a 1v1 the first time
2/24/2023 c2 Guest
What happened to his other two wishes
What happened to his other two wishes
2/25/2023 c2 jbugay501
Interested to see how the new version unfolds compared to the old. Hope Percy and margeary still get together. Keep it up!
Interested to see how the new version unfolds compared to the old. Hope Percy and margeary still get together. Keep it up!