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6/13 c2 Antianti12
You know Robb has Tully looks red hair blue eyes and Jon has stark looks? thats one of the main reasons Catelyn was so hostile to Jon he looks more like a stark and she's afraid other northerners will think the same and try and make him lord. Plus really Percy automatically thinks Jon isn't Ned's son? That just to unbelievable plus outsiders aren't allowed by the weirwood tree in winterfell only starks.
5/23 c1 11Fontina Ori-chan
i don't know why... but in my eyes, 'always and forever' is a cursed oath... Maybe because of the fact that it brings nothing but misfortune and troubles...
3/22 c1 3Time Emperor
If Annabeth is brought back to life, I can no longer read this. While I have no doubt this was a good story, i cannot read as Percy gets back qith the worst character in the series.
3/20 c9 Talentedtal4200
This has nothing to do with the story but thumbs up to you for recommending a story at the end of every chapter the first three ive already read but i still appreciate the suggestions and i can tell you have good taste lol
3/5 c9 BlabberCrab5
I really hope you continue this story. I absolutely love it and the way you have written each of the characters. I can't wait for Percy to find out who the spy is (I personally think it's Claire).
2/23 c2 ThunderSphinx
Actually, Jon and Robb look nothing alike. Robb has the Southern Tully looks while the Stark blood runs strong in Jon.
2/8 c9 THE BIGKLEW
I am loving this story the only thing I have to complain about is that it takes so long for you to update it I also love the recommendations for fics you give at the end while I didn't enjoy all of them I did enjoy most of them so Kudos my friend hopefully your update speed on this fic picks up because I'm hooked.
1/31 c9 Sauqy55555
this is great
1/27 c9 Guest
Okay this story has some issues.
The dragon is growing to slowly and it should have been able to breathe fire from the start.
Why is Percy struggling strength wise against mortals? With his strength feats he should be able send people flying by kicking them or be able to rips limbs off with his hands. Not to mention his speed and reflexes, no mortal should be able to challenge him in combat. He is to fast and to strong.
Then we get to the finances and construction of the castle. A castle in Westeros would probably cost 1-2 million gold dragons. Since tourney reward are about 40 000 gold dragons and I doubt the crown is giving anyone anything remotely close to the amount needed to build a castle. And then you said his castle would be over 20 acres in size. Do you know how large an acre is? It’s about the size of a football field so a reasonable large castle wouldn’t be larger than 2-3 acres. His castle would probably be the largest castle in Westeros and would cost him probably up towards 50 million gold dragons. None of this makes any sense.
1/27 c9 aesir21
Surprising to a goddess and of course new name of night king. Goddess is reason for set backs so it should be smith sailing from now on. I hope Percy discovers or progress farther in his training to unlock the ability for water healing soon so he can heal himself and others.
1/24 c9 dan.lew.upg
great
1/22 c4 Guest
This is so bloody unrealistic like the premise and all but come on a dragon is a game changer capable of deciding the crown no one in their right mind would allow something like that to exist whilst not under their power it would have been better if he never found out and why would Eddard even enter his room without knocking he could have been doing anything in there especially since he is now a fellow Lord this novel sucks balls to be honest I undesirable trying to portray the starks has thus kind of good guys but no this is just terrible writing
1/22 c3 Guest
Um aren't demigods superhuman in physicality why the fuck would the old Gods even give a dragon egg and percy is the greatest sword man of his time going toe to toe with titans and gods alike really doubt he will struggle with a bunch of mortals
1/23 c9 myafroatemydog
Pretty great chap
1/21 c9 Guest
Hm I expected him to talk to need about what the goddess mentioned. I wonder if he'll have a small shrine built to the goddess in those woods
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