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for the spaces between light

5/3/2020 c1 15Data Seeker
Hi

Nice little fic, featuring Beast Boy and Raven. The suspense, drama and emotion are good. I do think some details need some fine-tuning. Shall I elaborate?

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No violence or any other vile content.

I hope you like this review, though it’s short and simple. God bless

Data Seeker
7/23/2019 c1 3Thatguyphepsy
cute and sweet
7/13/2019 c1 2Sanzojoe
I like a story we’re their feeling are more hesitate and they they don’t just jump in to liking each other right at the beginning. This was a great way to start something but I think they don’t even realize something is there.

I would like to find more of what they are feeling and why they where in the place to begin with.
7/13/2019 c1 104lunademel
Omg! This story is a shades of adorable! Loved it!
7/13/2019 c1 1Kimagure Bijin
Very lovely... I mean the fact that they are powerless and in complete darkness isn't but what happens between them is.
I hope you decide to make this a multichapter or at least write another one or two more shots following this story

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