for Straw Hats Vigilantes10/3/2024 c105 FairTheFair
you know i really think this story is going to go crazy later whit everything that is getting set up i can't wait to see the next chapter mostly because i love this fic
you know i really think this story is going to go crazy later whit everything that is getting set up i can't wait to see the next chapter mostly because i love this fic
10/1/2024 c2 mystiguess999
Good story so far but please work on your grammar and spelling. no offense though, just a blunt suggestion.
Good story so far but please work on your grammar and spelling. no offense though, just a blunt suggestion.
9/25/2024 c105 Guest
Try adding in maybe sabo or law to during I island world
Try adding in maybe sabo or law to during I island world
9/23/2024 c105 daniel
do you know senran kagura? What do you think of a Luffy fic since there are almost none of those?
do you know senran kagura? What do you think of a Luffy fic since there are almost none of those?
9/23/2024 c105 
8zakan
I got certain vibes from a certain One Piece movie, is Luffy going to use the spinning axe move here too?
8zakanI got certain vibes from a certain One Piece movie, is Luffy going to use the spinning axe move here too?
9/22/2024 c105 Guest
glad to have a new chapter don't worry about the grammar. I think you should make Melissa more of a role as she cannon in the main story you can the straw hats become friends with her. In the scene where she cries, Luffy puts his hat on her head and promises to get back her father.
glad to have a new chapter don't worry about the grammar. I think you should make Melissa more of a role as she cannon in the main story you can the straw hats become friends with her. In the scene where she cries, Luffy puts his hat on her head and promises to get back her father.
9/22/2024 c105 2Grand Chaos Master
I don't remember to said this before, but your fic feel just like One Piece and damn that's great.
2Grand Chaos MasterI don't remember to said this before, but your fic feel just like One Piece and damn that's great.