for Straw Hats Vigilantes7/19/2019 c2 
3deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover
Thank you! I love Hero acadamia but i was always sad we haven't seen a hint of a quirk less hero or villian(who was born quirkless).
3deathnoteno1fan-codegeassloverThank you! I love Hero acadamia but i was always sad we haven't seen a hint of a quirk less hero or villian(who was born quirkless).
7/18/2019 c3 ChunkyFunkyMunky
You should consider a beta; there is quite a lot of misspellings that could be easily fixed.
You should consider a beta; there is quite a lot of misspellings that could be easily fixed.
7/17/2019 c1 ChunkyFunkyMunky
Please use quotation marks, not double apostrophes; there seems to be a formatting error.
Please use quotation marks, not double apostrophes; there seems to be a formatting error.
7/13/2019 c1 Guest
Ok so the story is definitely the one thing I’ve always wanted from my time as a fangirl. You only need to improve your grammar and spelling, but I know that you aren’t actually English, if you want any ways to learn English I could tell you some ways.
Also are you Deku16mha from Wattpad? I know it’s random so sorry if you’re not.
Ok so the story is definitely the one thing I’ve always wanted from my time as a fangirl. You only need to improve your grammar and spelling, but I know that you aren’t actually English, if you want any ways to learn English I could tell you some ways.
Also are you Deku16mha from Wattpad? I know it’s random so sorry if you’re not.
7/13/2019 c1 Guest
Yes. This is what I need.
Yes. This is what I need.
7/14/2019 c2 SilentXD7
Very interesting story. I truly hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story. I honestly hope the strawhats destroy the people's beliefs when it comes to quirkless and those with quirks. Every one heavily rely on quirks and develop a twisted belief on power such as Bakugo and Endeavor. I honestly would love to see Luffy and Zoro destroy Bakugo and Endeavor's belief on power. I would also love to see Luffy defeating All Might in front of everyone. That will definitely cause people to rethink about their society. I honestly say that no one is capable of fighting against the Strawhat crew since they are literal monsters (especially the monster trio) and have more terrifying feats.
Very interesting story. I truly hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story. I honestly hope the strawhats destroy the people's beliefs when it comes to quirkless and those with quirks. Every one heavily rely on quirks and develop a twisted belief on power such as Bakugo and Endeavor. I honestly would love to see Luffy and Zoro destroy Bakugo and Endeavor's belief on power. I would also love to see Luffy defeating All Might in front of everyone. That will definitely cause people to rethink about their society. I honestly say that no one is capable of fighting against the Strawhat crew since they are literal monsters (especially the monster trio) and have more terrifying feats.
7/14/2019 c2 Elementor3358
It is interesting how you are putting together the story you can read "Justice By: Black 'Victor Cachat" to think of an idea of how straw hats react to a world of Heroes.
It is interesting how you are putting together the story you can read "Justice By: Black 'Victor Cachat" to think of an idea of how straw hats react to a world of Heroes.
7/13/2019 c1 PEJP BengtZone V2
You are clearly going to have Luffy use Armament Haki to block the knife from his throat.
Also, if you have trouble if English, you could watch the subbed version of the anime, along with the dubbed version, on either GoGoAnime and/or WatchCartoonOnline.
By the way; Have you ever held down 'SHIFT' when pressing '2' on your keyboard?
You are clearly going to have Luffy use Armament Haki to block the knife from his throat.
Also, if you have trouble if English, you could watch the subbed version of the anime, along with the dubbed version, on either GoGoAnime and/or WatchCartoonOnline.
By the way; Have you ever held down 'SHIFT' when pressing '2' on your keyboard?
7/12/2019 c1 8CRUDEN
Your grammar wasn't that bad, but you could find a beta reader if you want to make sure that your grammar is top notch. I like what you have so far, very nice
8CRUDENYour grammar wasn't that bad, but you could find a beta reader if you want to make sure that your grammar is top notch. I like what you have so far, very nice
7/12/2019 c1 7Kadek8785
hello, this fic seems interesting. Though I would say there are many mistakes in wording especially. For grammar, I notice some, but I can't say much since grammar is not my strongest unit.
You said you use Word right? Wasn't there a spelling check? You can use that to help you writing, but you also have to reread your story first before you upload thit.
7Kadek8785hello, this fic seems interesting. Though I would say there are many mistakes in wording especially. For grammar, I notice some, but I can't say much since grammar is not my strongest unit.
You said you use Word right? Wasn't there a spelling check? You can use that to help you writing, but you also have to reread your story first before you upload thit.