for Once Upon Another Time11/3/2019 c13 Guest
My heart is breaking! Can't wait for the story to continue!
My heart is breaking! Can't wait for the story to continue!
11/2/2019 c13 kwat0
This is all so horrific and exciting in equal measures, the energy of this fic is amazing. I can't wait for more updates, just WOW!
This is all so horrific and exciting in equal measures, the energy of this fic is amazing. I can't wait for more updates, just WOW!
11/1/2019 c13 
50Maze-zen
God, this chapter was heart breaking! Poor Christine for having been in such a bad accident and now traumatised by Kevin. Poor Erik who blames and punishes himself. Poor Nadir who's feeling helpless in all of this. And poor Meg and Raoul who can't help their miserable friend.
This phic is really good and I can't wait for more!
50Maze-zenGod, this chapter was heart breaking! Poor Christine for having been in such a bad accident and now traumatised by Kevin. Poor Erik who blames and punishes himself. Poor Nadir who's feeling helpless in all of this. And poor Meg and Raoul who can't help their miserable friend.
This phic is really good and I can't wait for more!
10/21/2019 c12 kwat0
I am loving this phic! You're killing me with the build up, in oh such a good way, but omg this climax! what a chapter! I love all your characters so much. Nadir's going to lose it when he finds out what's happened. I can't wait to see what happens next. You've got me hanging for more.
I am loving this phic! You're killing me with the build up, in oh such a good way, but omg this climax! what a chapter! I love all your characters so much. Nadir's going to lose it when he finds out what's happened. I can't wait to see what happens next. You've got me hanging for more.
10/18/2019 c12 12ghostwritten2
Oh my gosh! I hope Kevin goes to jail and I hope Christine will be all right. This was a great chapter; really kept me on the edge of my seat. I hope that Erik can help Christine to recover.
12ghostwritten2Oh my gosh! I hope Kevin goes to jail and I hope Christine will be all right. This was a great chapter; really kept me on the edge of my seat. I hope that Erik can help Christine to recover.
10/18/2019 c11 ghostwritten2
Oh no! They were so close! I do hope E and C get another chance soon. And I hope Kevin is really gone, but I worry. This is, as always, really well-written.
Oh no! They were so close! I do hope E and C get another chance soon. And I hope Kevin is really gone, but I worry. This is, as always, really well-written.
10/17/2019 c12 82Starwatcher2018
You did a great job building your story into this climactic moment. I can understand why you feel so proud.
82Starwatcher2018You did a great job building your story into this climactic moment. I can understand why you feel so proud.
10/17/2019 c12 50Maze-zen
Oh no, that's awful! Dammit, I doubt that is what Raoul meant when he said that stats would align and they would meet.
Please please, don't let me wait too long for the next chapter.
50Maze-zenOh no, that's awful! Dammit, I doubt that is what Raoul meant when he said that stats would align and they would meet.
Please please, don't let me wait too long for the next chapter.
10/15/2019 c11 Maze-zen
Finally a Christine who reacts with fear and apprehension at seeing him wearing a mask! That is a natural response to seeing a masked man, but very few actually write it and instead focus on the unmasking. But I like this reaction, though it meant that they didn't met... Again!
Hopefully they will both show up on the 12th and once and for all have the courage to meet!
Great chapter!
Finally a Christine who reacts with fear and apprehension at seeing him wearing a mask! That is a natural response to seeing a masked man, but very few actually write it and instead focus on the unmasking. But I like this reaction, though it meant that they didn't met... Again!
Hopefully they will both show up on the 12th and once and for all have the courage to meet!
Great chapter!
10/15/2019 c11 82Starwatcher2018
I admire the approach you are taking with the writing of this piece. It must be very challenging and it is well done. Hoping a meeting will happen sooner than later for our young friends. Also, hope Kevin is out of the picture, but life being what it is, I doubt it.
82Starwatcher2018I admire the approach you are taking with the writing of this piece. It must be very challenging and it is well done. Hoping a meeting will happen sooner than later for our young friends. Also, hope Kevin is out of the picture, but life being what it is, I doubt it.
10/7/2019 c10 kwat0
Ah this douch bag Kevin has me all riled up, what a manipulative, abusive piece of work! I feel so bad for Christine, she's so isolated and alone most of the time, thank God she has Nadir, I'm loving their comraderie.
I love the way you write the music scenes with Erik and Christine, you have such a great way of describing the feeling of the music, and how it changes according to their moods. They say so much to each other without saying anything at all. And I have to say that I love the way you've written Erik throughout the story so far, the mood swings, the mumbling, brooding lows to his super joyful ups, such a boisterous erratic personality and yet he's so nervous to meet her face to face! It's so much fun to read, I'm loving the dynamics to their relationship and it's only just beginning. The way you had them keep just missing each other on their vacations!
I really like all the stuff about Venus as well, I didn't know planets had songs! I enjoy all thing space, and I like the idea of Erik being an astronomy buff. Can't wait to read more.
Ah this douch bag Kevin has me all riled up, what a manipulative, abusive piece of work! I feel so bad for Christine, she's so isolated and alone most of the time, thank God she has Nadir, I'm loving their comraderie.
I love the way you write the music scenes with Erik and Christine, you have such a great way of describing the feeling of the music, and how it changes according to their moods. They say so much to each other without saying anything at all. And I have to say that I love the way you've written Erik throughout the story so far, the mood swings, the mumbling, brooding lows to his super joyful ups, such a boisterous erratic personality and yet he's so nervous to meet her face to face! It's so much fun to read, I'm loving the dynamics to their relationship and it's only just beginning. The way you had them keep just missing each other on their vacations!
I really like all the stuff about Venus as well, I didn't know planets had songs! I enjoy all thing space, and I like the idea of Erik being an astronomy buff. Can't wait to read more.
10/5/2019 c2 kwat0
Really enjoying this so far, I like how you described Erik's music as filling people with a craving to embrace darkness and welcome despair. And how he first reacts when he sees and hears Christine is perfect! I love the way you describe a feeling and or emmotions, it's very satisfying to read. Christine's reaction to the grief of losing her father feels so real.
Really enjoying this so far, I like how you described Erik's music as filling people with a craving to embrace darkness and welcome despair. And how he first reacts when he sees and hears Christine is perfect! I love the way you describe a feeling and or emmotions, it's very satisfying to read. Christine's reaction to the grief of losing her father feels so real.
9/14/2019 c10 Starwatcher2018
When I saw your post on tumblr (I am i-penna over there), I thought I had been reading it already. Well, I was wrong, so spent the last couple of hours catching up.
Your description of Kevin's abusive nature is spot on and writing it must be difficult.
As with many chapters, the characters sometimes take over and begin to do the writing. I hope this leads to Erik and Christine coming face to face. I sense she might need his physical presence in addition to the musical (soul) support he has been giving so far.
Looking forward to your next entry.
When I saw your post on tumblr (I am i-penna over there), I thought I had been reading it already. Well, I was wrong, so spent the last couple of hours catching up.
Your description of Kevin's abusive nature is spot on and writing it must be difficult.
As with many chapters, the characters sometimes take over and begin to do the writing. I hope this leads to Erik and Christine coming face to face. I sense she might need his physical presence in addition to the musical (soul) support he has been giving so far.
Looking forward to your next entry.