for Harry Potter: Return of the Death Walker5/14 c1 Koldbones
if you didn't pair him with bush head and the red-headed gold digger, it might have been ok.
if you didn't pair him with bush head and the red-headed gold digger, it might have been ok.
5/2 c38 Mhushaka
Me encanta tu historia, continuala por favor
Me encanta tu historia, continuala por favor
4/8 c38 mmancell044gmail.com
I really hope you continue and finish this story! It’s so good I don’t want it to end
I really hope you continue and finish this story! It’s so good I don’t want it to end
1/29 c9 EffremXRC
Loving this story...
But, yes there it is...
Are you using a speech to text program for this?
The typo's (if you can call it that), appear to be accent related, not misspellings.
Loving this story...
But, yes there it is...
Are you using a speech to text program for this?
The typo's (if you can call it that), appear to be accent related, not misspellings.
1/27 c38 
3Charlee56
I just got through re-reading the entire story and it's every bit as riveting as when I first read it. I can only hope that chapter 39 is coming soon!
3Charlee56I just got through re-reading the entire story and it's every bit as riveting as when I first read it. I can only hope that chapter 39 is coming soon!
1/2 c30 Charlee56
Lordy, Lordy! I'd forgotten I'd beta'd this chapter (31)!
It's been so long, but I do love this story!
Lordy, Lordy! I'd forgotten I'd beta'd this chapter (31)!
It's been so long, but I do love this story!
12/15/2024 c1 Charlee56
Amazing chapter! So very introspective, and from so many differing points of view. Utterly ingenious!
Amazing chapter! So very introspective, and from so many differing points of view. Utterly ingenious!
12/11/2024 c33 Fredward1
Aaaaannnnnd we’re back to this bullshit again. “Oh no, I don’t wanna be like that anymore”. Are we gonna get this like every five chapters? It’s getting repetitive. Every time he makes a change about himself and then you just revert him back to this.
Aaaaannnnnd we’re back to this bullshit again. “Oh no, I don’t wanna be like that anymore”. Are we gonna get this like every five chapters? It’s getting repetitive. Every time he makes a change about himself and then you just revert him back to this.
12/11/2024 c29 Fredward1
“his magic would have a body and mind capable of utilizing all the weapons at his disposal” is what you said. Well, guess what? He can age himself up 10 years to have the body to fit his magic. Because that is what you are saying is the only thing holding him back. His body and mind. Not his magic. His body.
“his magic would have a body and mind capable of utilizing all the weapons at his disposal” is what you said. Well, guess what? He can age himself up 10 years to have the body to fit his magic. Because that is what you are saying is the only thing holding him back. His body and mind. Not his magic. His body.
12/11/2024 c28 Fredward1
He pulled the sword out of the hat in the beginning of the fucking story. The hat literally told him to pull it out. Then he put it back in there and you totally forgot about it. Again, you have done this where you have forgotten what you wrote.
He pulled the sword out of the hat in the beginning of the fucking story. The hat literally told him to pull it out. Then he put it back in there and you totally forgot about it. Again, you have done this where you have forgotten what you wrote.
12/11/2024 c28 Fredward1
Why is he bragging about his feats? I get that some people have things to get off their chest, but this is just coming off as bragging, not pained.
Why is he bragging about his feats? I get that some people have things to get off their chest, but this is just coming off as bragging, not pained.
12/11/2024 c25 Fredward1
Again, Sirius black was mentioned as his godfather in the will. Something that you have clearly forgotten that you have written in previous chapters. Take the time to reread your story and get your facts right.
Again, Sirius black was mentioned as his godfather in the will. Something that you have clearly forgotten that you have written in previous chapters. Take the time to reread your story and get your facts right.
12/11/2024 c19 Fredward1
Again, you have forgotten that he already dealt with the dog before, so the dog should remember him. It’s the little things that let me know that you forgot entire details of the story that you’ve written.
Again, you have forgotten that he already dealt with the dog before, so the dog should remember him. It’s the little things that let me know that you forgot entire details of the story that you’ve written.
12/11/2024 c16 Fredward1
I think you forgot that Daphne sat next to Harry in the earlier chapters. She willingly moved over towards him and he was fine with it. She was already close enough to become friends, but then you totally forgot about that and then you still have forgotten about that. This is why you reread your work so you don’t forget shit you’ve written.
I think you forgot that Daphne sat next to Harry in the earlier chapters. She willingly moved over towards him and he was fine with it. She was already close enough to become friends, but then you totally forgot about that and then you still have forgotten about that. This is why you reread your work so you don’t forget shit you’ve written.
12/10/2024 c3 Fredward1
So he can’t remember much about the goblins, but he can speak their language? That doesn’t make sense.
So he can’t remember much about the goblins, but he can speak their language? That doesn’t make sense.