10/31 c46 Guest
Most definitely not the kind of fic i expected to read but good job so far. I was hooked enough to binge read 46 chapters and i hope the rest will be as good.
Most definitely not the kind of fic i expected to read but good job so far. I was hooked enough to binge read 46 chapters and i hope the rest will be as good.
10/30 c46 5Jack Redhawke
Whenever you have a word in italics, it has no space been other eords. And is just smashed against them
Whenever you have a word in italics, it has no space been other eords. And is just smashed against them
10/29 c46 anmjiel
A lot of sentences had some of the words kind of smushed together, it seems to happen whenever you use italics, so you should maybe fix that.
A lot of sentences had some of the words kind of smushed together, it seems to happen whenever you use italics, so you should maybe fix that.
6/17 c44 Guest
Are you okay? I am somewhat concerned. You went from updating so often to going this long without updating. If you are taking a break, blocked in your writing or just forgot to update, please let us know so that we don't worry needlessly about it. Not just for the story, but for you as well.
Are you okay? I am somewhat concerned. You went from updating so often to going this long without updating. If you are taking a break, blocked in your writing or just forgot to update, please let us know so that we don't worry needlessly about it. Not just for the story, but for you as well.