for Random Acts of Kindness12/5/2022 c6 Singular Ash
Why are the text blocks only in the first 3 or so paragraphs every chapter when the rest looks just fine?
If you know how to prevent them, then why are they always there?
Why are the text blocks only in the first 3 or so paragraphs every chapter when the rest looks just fine?
If you know how to prevent them, then why are they always there?
12/5/2022 c2 Singular Ash
The text block at the beginning is absolutely horrendous. I edit for authors and I’m cringe so damn hard not being able to fix this.
I really hope it’s not like this for all the rest of the story.
The text block at the beginning is absolutely horrendous. I edit for authors and I’m cringe so damn hard not being able to fix this.
I really hope it’s not like this for all the rest of the story.
12/2/2022 c36 M
The princess has to be Pyrrha, right? Five years ago, when she was still young, she and her family “die” in a bunch of Grimm infested woods, and there was never the mention of a body. Furthermore, if Cinder didn’t become the evil woman she was in canon, someone would surely replace her, right? So, Pyrrha, because of her skill and how young she was. Pyrrha is Cinder’s replacement, she’s the Princess, right?
Going past my schizo ramblings, I must admit that this is a very interesting story. A little too short for my tastes, but I’ll take what I can get. Excellent grammar, pacing, and characters! I am very excited for Casper to save the day, as I am wishing for more action that RWBY is known for, but like I said: I’ll take what I can get! Wonderful story, I await the next chapter!
The princess has to be Pyrrha, right? Five years ago, when she was still young, she and her family “die” in a bunch of Grimm infested woods, and there was never the mention of a body. Furthermore, if Cinder didn’t become the evil woman she was in canon, someone would surely replace her, right? So, Pyrrha, because of her skill and how young she was. Pyrrha is Cinder’s replacement, she’s the Princess, right?
Going past my schizo ramblings, I must admit that this is a very interesting story. A little too short for my tastes, but I’ll take what I can get. Excellent grammar, pacing, and characters! I am very excited for Casper to save the day, as I am wishing for more action that RWBY is known for, but like I said: I’ll take what I can get! Wonderful story, I await the next chapter!
12/1/2022 c36 raph772
i really like this story but i wish it updated more often or that the chapter were at least a bit longer
i really like this story but i wish it updated more often or that the chapter were at least a bit longer
12/1/2022 c36 
6Starhammer
They're about to get fucked over, hard. Even if their plan succeeds, it's Schwartz doing the writing, and we all know how Schwartz doesn't give two shits about what side he's on, he will record exactly what happened, how it happened and everything before and after what happened. The plan of these fucks is going to fail even if they do succeed in bombing these people.
6StarhammerThey're about to get fucked over, hard. Even if their plan succeeds, it's Schwartz doing the writing, and we all know how Schwartz doesn't give two shits about what side he's on, he will record exactly what happened, how it happened and everything before and after what happened. The plan of these fucks is going to fail even if they do succeed in bombing these people.
11/27/2022 c35 HelpingHand
So Mercury got adopted by Ironwood. I wonder who is next. Maybe Ghira and Kali can adopt Ren and Nora. It could show humans and faunus getting along. Or Sienna could do it, that would give her a different perspective on things. Summer and Tai taking in Emerald?
It would be interesting if he got Jaune to get training to become a huntsman somehow.
Does the treaty say anything about Menagerie having no Huntsmen academy? Maybe Casper could tell them about that loophole if it doesn’t. Ozpin could support it to get more hunters for the Grimm and Vacuo respects strength. Maybe academies can have airships.
So Mercury got adopted by Ironwood. I wonder who is next. Maybe Ghira and Kali can adopt Ren and Nora. It could show humans and faunus getting along. Or Sienna could do it, that would give her a different perspective on things. Summer and Tai taking in Emerald?
It would be interesting if he got Jaune to get training to become a huntsman somehow.
Does the treaty say anything about Menagerie having no Huntsmen academy? Maybe Casper could tell them about that loophole if it doesn’t. Ozpin could support it to get more hunters for the Grimm and Vacuo respects strength. Maybe academies can have airships.
11/1/2022 c35 Guest
Evil Cliffhanger!
Evil Cliffhanger!
9/19/2022 c35 Guest
All caught up. Need moar of this ASAP!
All caught up. Need moar of this ASAP!
9/4/2022 c35 Toasta
this is really nice thanks for the banger job, I'm already curios tho if Shwartz is ever going to tell Cinder the secret that he sorta knows the future
this is really nice thanks for the banger job, I'm already curios tho if Shwartz is ever going to tell Cinder the secret that he sorta knows the future
7/21/2022 c35 8CriticaofRandomness
Ples update I need moar cute Cinder and smoll Mercury time while Schwartz is trying not to fuck the timeline too massively
8CriticaofRandomnessPles update I need moar cute Cinder and smoll Mercury time while Schwartz is trying not to fuck the timeline too massively
7/19/2022 c35 6Starhammer
And Schwartz gets thrown right back into the middle of the shitstorm immediately. Just another day at the office.
6StarhammerAnd Schwartz gets thrown right back into the middle of the shitstorm immediately. Just another day at the office.
7/5/2022 c34 Unded R
One of the most original RWBY stories I've seen in a good while. I hope the next chapter will be posted real soon.
One of the most original RWBY stories I've seen in a good while. I hope the next chapter will be posted real soon.