for The Iron Gamer of Kumo3/12 c15 ImHateful
I hope Kioshi and Yugito end up together, or perhaps Samui and him do? I hope we see that lovely lady soon.
But yeah, I'm really routing for the Yugito route, I love their relationship and I love her portrayal in this story, I think due to all the previous development that was written between the two have opened up the next step into their relationship, like it seems only logical to me for them to become am item. I find the idea adorable and cute, I don't really see Kioshi as a teenager, as it was mentioned before, he's in his mid thirty's so it's a bit of a gray area but that can be fixed if a few more years pass. Or not, either way, I think he's eligible for dating her.
I hope Kioshi and Yugito end up together, or perhaps Samui and him do? I hope we see that lovely lady soon.
But yeah, I'm really routing for the Yugito route, I love their relationship and I love her portrayal in this story, I think due to all the previous development that was written between the two have opened up the next step into their relationship, like it seems only logical to me for them to become am item. I find the idea adorable and cute, I don't really see Kioshi as a teenager, as it was mentioned before, he's in his mid thirty's so it's a bit of a gray area but that can be fixed if a few more years pass. Or not, either way, I think he's eligible for dating her.
1/27 c15 
1gv100
This story has got to be my all time favorite fanfic after reading thousands. Been following it since it had 5 likes and its only gotten better. Your way with words and descriptions of the vast and varied landscapes of the elemental nations is utterly captivating and your characters feel like they could hop out of my screen. This is a masterpiece and a testament to what a truly creative mind can breathe into life. You could do anything you want with your life but im truly happy you spend a few hours to let us lowly worms glimpse into your imagination
1gv100This story has got to be my all time favorite fanfic after reading thousands. Been following it since it had 5 likes and its only gotten better. Your way with words and descriptions of the vast and varied landscapes of the elemental nations is utterly captivating and your characters feel like they could hop out of my screen. This is a masterpiece and a testament to what a truly creative mind can breathe into life. You could do anything you want with your life but im truly happy you spend a few hours to let us lowly worms glimpse into your imagination
1/3 c13 bdydvl
What the fck happened to the ame jonin that shimmered? Did she fcking teleport through salt?
The summoning "animal" is way too weird, also why didn't mc use observe on what seemed to be it's avatar ?He can observe objects and dungeon animals, so why would this be different?when is his observe going to gain another function btw?
The whole incident was nonsensical
How much time did mc spend in dungeon and is it aging him prematurely?
Kumogakure has a Space time jutsu tho? Heavenly transfer?
Mc didn't consider one solution, kill every Uchiha, no sharingan-no rinnegan- no one can summon the gedo statue if he put it in the inventory or just seal it
What the fck happened to the ame jonin that shimmered? Did she fcking teleport through salt?
The summoning "animal" is way too weird, also why didn't mc use observe on what seemed to be it's avatar ?He can observe objects and dungeon animals, so why would this be different?when is his observe going to gain another function btw?
The whole incident was nonsensical
How much time did mc spend in dungeon and is it aging him prematurely?
Kumogakure has a Space time jutsu tho? Heavenly transfer?
Mc didn't consider one solution, kill every Uchiha, no sharingan-no rinnegan- no one can summon the gedo statue if he put it in the inventory or just seal it
1/3 c12 bdydvl
Will mc be able to feel the iron in people's blood when he max out his kekkei genkai? Controlling it would impede on the ketsurigan(?) so i don't expect it
Why didn't he tell anyone about the makino official possibly fcking with he mines and worker to make money ?yes he can't use his observe as a source but just with it he found multiple things that didn't make sense and that could be used to form an investigation
Hell with his kekkei genkai he could prospect an entire mountain in a weaek for iron ore
Also with all those timeskip how much crimson sand did he manage to take from that dungeon?
Would the traitors not have at least a "bad" relationship with mc since his existence is a risk for most of their smuggling operation? And having a bad relationship with an anbu should mean mc should observe them semi frequently
Did mc complete the rasengan?
Why did he use his points?
Will mc be able to feel the iron in people's blood when he max out his kekkei genkai? Controlling it would impede on the ketsurigan(?) so i don't expect it
Why didn't he tell anyone about the makino official possibly fcking with he mines and worker to make money ?yes he can't use his observe as a source but just with it he found multiple things that didn't make sense and that could be used to form an investigation
Hell with his kekkei genkai he could prospect an entire mountain in a weaek for iron ore
Also with all those timeskip how much crimson sand did he manage to take from that dungeon?
Would the traitors not have at least a "bad" relationship with mc since his existence is a risk for most of their smuggling operation? And having a bad relationship with an anbu should mean mc should observe them semi frequently
Did mc complete the rasengan?
Why did he use his points?
1/2 c9 bdydvl
Mc should be sensing for metal at all time(even more when on missions), getting ambushed by a clone or someone with Intel can happen, but this one? It was stupid, he wouldn't have had the speed to counter anyway but he should have known
When is he going to train the shunshin'? It's been months since he said he needed it
Mc should be sensing for metal at all time(even more when on missions), getting ambushed by a clone or someone with Intel can happen, but this one? It was stupid, he wouldn't have had the speed to counter anyway but he should have known
When is he going to train the shunshin'? It's been months since he said he needed it
12/9/2024 c6 White Obama
Huh, i didn’t noticed he was attached to his father? Maybe i missed some dialogue between the two? Just a thought, was weirded out by the sudden grief of the MC.
Huh, i didn’t noticed he was attached to his father? Maybe i missed some dialogue between the two? Just a thought, was weirded out by the sudden grief of the MC.
11/30/2024 c13 Guest
Honestly? It is no wonder this was dropped.
The idea is great and the author is a good writer. But he just makes shit decision after shit decision in this story.
What do the readers actually want from this? Well, they wanna see gamer OC with magnet release getting stronger and using his bloodline limit in unique ways. They want to see him gradually grow more powerful. And ever since she was introduced, they want to see his interaction with Yugito. It does not need to be a relationship or sex thing either. But they had a great dynamic before.
But then the author decided that making mistakes is sexy or something. So, he punted the MC into ANBU and pretty much cut Yugito out of the story. It became boring. I personally don't give a rat's ass about ANBU. Screw that. Not interesting. Not why I kept reading the story during the earlier chapters. And since that happened, the story nosedived hard.
Second mistake was the relationship drama between MC and Yugito. This is not a soap opera. Go fck yourself with that BS. That's not what people want to see when they click on Naruto fic. It's just bothersome. Another thing that makes the story worse.
The encounter with Zabuza was good. The encounter with Team 10 was good. More of that would have been great. But instead, we got some boring generic ANBU BS missions that I personally skipped because fuck that. And I believe a lot of other people did that too. It's simply NOT what the story should be about. The earlier chapters created certain expectations and the author just decided, 'Yeah, nah, let's just go off the rails', and all the good work to make the reader interested was just blown away.
Honestly? It is no wonder this was dropped.
The idea is great and the author is a good writer. But he just makes shit decision after shit decision in this story.
What do the readers actually want from this? Well, they wanna see gamer OC with magnet release getting stronger and using his bloodline limit in unique ways. They want to see him gradually grow more powerful. And ever since she was introduced, they want to see his interaction with Yugito. It does not need to be a relationship or sex thing either. But they had a great dynamic before.
But then the author decided that making mistakes is sexy or something. So, he punted the MC into ANBU and pretty much cut Yugito out of the story. It became boring. I personally don't give a rat's ass about ANBU. Screw that. Not interesting. Not why I kept reading the story during the earlier chapters. And since that happened, the story nosedived hard.
Second mistake was the relationship drama between MC and Yugito. This is not a soap opera. Go fck yourself with that BS. That's not what people want to see when they click on Naruto fic. It's just bothersome. Another thing that makes the story worse.
The encounter with Zabuza was good. The encounter with Team 10 was good. More of that would have been great. But instead, we got some boring generic ANBU BS missions that I personally skipped because fuck that. And I believe a lot of other people did that too. It's simply NOT what the story should be about. The earlier chapters created certain expectations and the author just decided, 'Yeah, nah, let's just go off the rails', and all the good work to make the reader interested was just blown away.
11/25/2024 c15 Guest
Really excited when I saw that this story updated, one of my favorites on this website that I still check on periodically. Hope life is treating you respectfully enough. Looking forward to the next update.
Really excited when I saw that this story updated, one of my favorites on this website that I still check on periodically. Hope life is treating you respectfully enough. Looking forward to the next update.
11/5/2024 c15 1Darkness-Over-Evil
Marvellous, just the itch i was looking to scratch. Ive just read through the entire story thus far, and it was so much more than i was hoping. Im really pleased by how you’ve taken your time to go through the mechanics of growth at the start, and allow time to flow in a manner that allows the reader to understand development is ongoing, but we dont have to see that development. I have faith in the MC, but i still worry for him in situations. Your relationships and world building have been realistic, honest and not over the top. It paints a grim overlook of the elemental nations outside of the prosperity that Konoha has hoarded and displays the hardships of other lands. The use of terrain, economic troubles and overall movement of civiliians has been interesting as well. A great read, something I’ve really enjoyed and am looking forward for more. Thank you for writing this!
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1Darkness-Over-EvilMarvellous, just the itch i was looking to scratch. Ive just read through the entire story thus far, and it was so much more than i was hoping. Im really pleased by how you’ve taken your time to go through the mechanics of growth at the start, and allow time to flow in a manner that allows the reader to understand development is ongoing, but we dont have to see that development. I have faith in the MC, but i still worry for him in situations. Your relationships and world building have been realistic, honest and not over the top. It paints a grim overlook of the elemental nations outside of the prosperity that Konoha has hoarded and displays the hardships of other lands. The use of terrain, economic troubles and overall movement of civiliians has been interesting as well. A great read, something I’ve really enjoyed and am looking forward for more. Thank you for writing this!
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10/18/2024 c15 Guest
This is SO GOOD
I love all the butterflies too. Subtle but very interesting
This is SO GOOD
I love all the butterflies too. Subtle but very interesting
10/21/2024 c6 Regtech
I wonder if kumo killed his father to instill a sense of hate towards their enemies and to increase his drive. After all, why not work on a potential powerhouse, when it just costs one broken jonin?
I wonder if kumo killed his father to instill a sense of hate towards their enemies and to increase his drive. After all, why not work on a potential powerhouse, when it just costs one broken jonin?
10/9/2024 c15 Bmehok03
i really liked this chapter. after binge reading the whole story i have to say im impressed. its detailed and doesnt drag at unnecessary parts.
i really liked this chapter. after binge reading the whole story i have to say im impressed. its detailed and doesnt drag at unnecessary parts.