
8/5/2022 c14 demigod0414
Hm. What about chakra suppression? Why is he panicking? Its reference to Otsutsuki clan which can naturally suppress their chakra?
Hm. What about chakra suppression? Why is he panicking? Its reference to Otsutsuki clan which can naturally suppress their chakra?
8/5/2022 c14 Zentari2238
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That was something, that something being 'meh'. MC decides to be a dumbass, somehow getting superstealth is a bad thing and there's cryptic destiny bullshit to cap the whole thing.
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That was something, that something being 'meh'. MC decides to be a dumbass, somehow getting superstealth is a bad thing and there's cryptic destiny bullshit to cap the whole thing.
8/5/2022 c14
3Foxy-Floof
Not gonna lie, this chapter was confusing as heck. Ikatama's speech is so... annoying.

Not gonna lie, this chapter was confusing as heck. Ikatama's speech is so... annoying.
8/5/2022 c14 JustDusty
It's been a while since I've read this.
I'm just curious though. Is ninja jesus going to be a thing in this fic? Kage Bunshin doesn't seem as overpowered as it is in canon.
It's been a while since I've read this.
I'm just curious though. Is ninja jesus going to be a thing in this fic? Kage Bunshin doesn't seem as overpowered as it is in canon.
8/5/2022 c14 Aacent
Idk what happened to you or what took you so long to stay safe but keep your head up and stay safe n happy I loved this story n I still do hopefully u can make a way to upload more if not that’s fine to but 10/10 writing
Idk what happened to you or what took you so long to stay safe but keep your head up and stay safe n happy I loved this story n I still do hopefully u can make a way to upload more if not that’s fine to but 10/10 writing
8/5/2022 c14 1.6180339887498948482045868
excited to see this is active! hope everything's going well for you!
excited to see this is active! hope everything's going well for you!
8/5/2022 c14
12Sultan Asil Arslan-Hiatus
Nice to see this again. And nice that you added some lore through Muu. No one uses that guy for some reason

Nice to see this again. And nice that you added some lore through Muu. No one uses that guy for some reason
8/5/2022 c14
2merendinoemiliano
Glad you returned here, excellebt descriptions, cannot wait to see next fights

Glad you returned here, excellebt descriptions, cannot wait to see next fights
8/5/2022 c14 EyeofSoren
Great chapter and a great example of writing yourself into a logical corner, now does he just never do standard stealth or is there some creative way to get out of it?
Great chapter and a great example of writing yourself into a logical corner, now does he just never do standard stealth or is there some creative way to get out of it?