for The Player is a Part Timer12/9 c2 Ren Amaki
The MC personality suck. I think arc 6 Natsuki Subaru personality from Re:Zero is way better than this MC and he would make for a better MC too. No one had as much as a character development like Subaru.
The MC personality suck. I think arc 6 Natsuki Subaru personality from Re:Zero is way better than this MC and he would make for a better MC too. No one had as much as a character development like Subaru.
12/9 c1 Joseph Rossel
Mannnn! This is such a deep and dope story, mate the concept of this story really hit me hard. I have a couple of ideas I’m damn sure you’ll like!
Contact info:
Email:
Discord: Josephrossel
Best regards,
Joseph
Mannnn! This is such a deep and dope story, mate the concept of this story really hit me hard. I have a couple of ideas I’m damn sure you’ll like!
Contact info:
Email:
Discord: Josephrossel
Best regards,
Joseph
11/23 c20 Truth lover
Finally, for the first time in 20 chapters, there's at least something interesting to justify having the Overlord fandom in the tags.
Finally, for the first time in 20 chapters, there's at least something interesting to justify having the Overlord fandom in the tags.
11/6 c20 Acqua OfThe Back
Tuve tres capítulos de golpe y solo me quejo con el 19 que se sintió innecesario, por lo demás fantastico
Tuve tres capítulos de golpe y solo me quejo con el 19 que se sintió innecesario, por lo demás fantastico
10/29 c1 
1FireFox2590
Hey, just wanted to let you know that I would be super interested in beta reading the book and editing these older chapters if you want. I understand you aren't a native English speaker and would be happy to help clean it up a little.
1FireFox2590Hey, just wanted to let you know that I would be super interested in beta reading the book and editing these older chapters if you want. I understand you aren't a native English speaker and would be happy to help clean it up a little.
10/25 c18 gerend
Finally read the chapter, I'm horrible I know. This one was ok, a lot of it felt unnecessary, Kiba's scene felt a tiny bit too long and I feel like the entire Tokyo bit could just be pulled out. Maybe that's just because I'm already familiar with that part of the backstory.
Finally read the chapter, I'm horrible I know. This one was ok, a lot of it felt unnecessary, Kiba's scene felt a tiny bit too long and I feel like the entire Tokyo bit could just be pulled out. Maybe that's just because I'm already familiar with that part of the backstory.
10/16 c18 Guest
Im really happy that you are back.
Im really happy that you are back.