for Conflicting Ideals6/18 c35 Zsombi
I liked your story better until last chapter before you introduced a new Fate character, especially on the antagonist side, and now you introduce another one.
By the plot summary this was supposed to be a story about the adventures of Shirou and Rin in the MHA'verse, but by now you have changed it into acompletely different type of story. You should update the plot summary to save future readers wasting their time on genres they don't want to read. If I would have known this will actually turn out as a crossover, then I would have skipped it entirely instead of spending hours on getting this far in. I'm out.
I liked your story better until last chapter before you introduced a new Fate character, especially on the antagonist side, and now you introduce another one.
By the plot summary this was supposed to be a story about the adventures of Shirou and Rin in the MHA'verse, but by now you have changed it into acompletely different type of story. You should update the plot summary to save future readers wasting their time on genres they don't want to read. If I would have known this will actually turn out as a crossover, then I would have skipped it entirely instead of spending hours on getting this far in. I'm out.
5/1 c58 Crywolf178
I found this story a couple days ago and got hooked.
Though I have to say the last dozen chapters just seem to be getting way too angsty for my tastes.
Thank you for sharing your work either way!
I found this story a couple days ago and got hooked.
Though I have to say the last dozen chapters just seem to be getting way too angsty for my tastes.
Thank you for sharing your work either way!
4/29 c1 Crywolf178
A few spelling and grammar issues here and there but overall the first chapter was pretty interesting and I look forward to the next one.
A few spelling and grammar issues here and there but overall the first chapter was pretty interesting and I look forward to the next one.
4/25 c16 adamfranklin.uu
This passage skillfully illustrates Jiro's growing realization of the difference between her approach and Shirou's, offering a glimpse into the level of strategy and focus required to excel at a professional level. It's a well executed moment of self-reflection, highlighting the intense competition and the importance of constantly adapting and learning in such high-stakes situations.
This passage skillfully illustrates Jiro's growing realization of the difference between her approach and Shirou's, offering a glimpse into the level of strategy and focus required to excel at a professional level. It's a well executed moment of self-reflection, highlighting the intense competition and the importance of constantly adapting and learning in such high-stakes situations.
4/2 c45 yesyesyes1212
I guess the situation called for it? Now he will be hunted for his reality marble
I guess the situation called for it? Now he will be hunted for his reality marble
4/2 c36 yesyesyes1212
i wonder who the archer for this possession will be, will it be EMIYA or will it be a poor excuse of Gilgamesh? We all know Gilgamesh cannot be altered, so the highest chance is a shadow version of him
i wonder who the archer for this possession will be, will it be EMIYA or will it be a poor excuse of Gilgamesh? We all know Gilgamesh cannot be altered, so the highest chance is a shadow version of him
4/2 c34 yesyesyes1212
I like the fact that you made shirou influence the guys there, deku in canon would have never plucked another's eye out
I like the fact that you made shirou influence the guys there, deku in canon would have never plucked another's eye out
4/2 c17 yesyesyes1212
Actually a befitting end of shirou vs rin, showing the upper level of his blue prints was abit too dangerous so rin probably decided to forfeit to make their lives easier
Actually a befitting end of shirou vs rin, showing the upper level of his blue prints was abit too dangerous so rin probably decided to forfeit to make their lives easier
4/2 c5 yesyesyes1212
Just found this fanfic, the beginning is as usual, shirou joining the school because of his age, but one thing i find uncommon is this shirou actually read shigaraki and didnt summon a np to kill the guy like most fanfic depicting shirou, and it hooked me in, shirou by himself will be very self destructive but with Rin here, he will know of his own priority.
Just found this fanfic, the beginning is as usual, shirou joining the school because of his age, but one thing i find uncommon is this shirou actually read shigaraki and didnt summon a np to kill the guy like most fanfic depicting shirou, and it hooked me in, shirou by himself will be very self destructive but with Rin here, he will know of his own priority.
3/19 c65 Star
Funny how jiro and team are out there, busting their asses trying to buy him time meanwhile Shirou is chilling instead. What was his plan anyways? Capturing toga did little to nothing
Funny how jiro and team are out there, busting their asses trying to buy him time meanwhile Shirou is chilling instead. What was his plan anyways? Capturing toga did little to nothing