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1LuminouShadowAlt
This is getting boring. Nothing significant is happening. I just feel like I am reading words or maybe superpower wiki. Like you have defined his powers well but thats it. It doesn't feel like there's anything else than him discovering about his power.
Also dunno how but you have managed to make Shirou more powerful than canon but still read as if he is weaker than canon. Dunno how really? Like if I do stat sheets he will be way way powerful than canon shirou since he is unkillable, physically stronger with atmost beyond humanly limit of reinforcement available to him. But reading feels as if he is weaker than him.
1LuminouShadowAltThis is getting boring. Nothing significant is happening. I just feel like I am reading words or maybe superpower wiki. Like you have defined his powers well but thats it. It doesn't feel like there's anything else than him discovering about his power.
Also dunno how but you have managed to make Shirou more powerful than canon but still read as if he is weaker than canon. Dunno how really? Like if I do stat sheets he will be way way powerful than canon shirou since he is unkillable, physically stronger with atmost beyond humanly limit of reinforcement available to him. But reading feels as if he is weaker than him.
3/30 c8 LuminouShadowAlt
Okay clearly sumite care about shirouand also knows that giving information about him is inviting trouble.
But she informs Rozay anyway(if she can make connection that informing rinwill inform churchbringing churchmen to them, then she could have made connection too that tozay will inform them after all she atleast knows her glfor more than 2 millenium).
So either bringing trouble benefits them, or she is betraying shirou or you forced it for the plot.
Okay clearly sumite care about shirouand also knows that giving information about him is inviting trouble.
But she informs Rozay anyway(if she can make connection that informing rinwill inform churchbringing churchmen to them, then she could have made connection too that tozay will inform them after all she atleast knows her glfor more than 2 millenium).
So either bringing trouble benefits them, or she is betraying shirou or you forced it for the plot.
3/30 c7 LuminouShadowAlt
Why did sumire informed them tho. I doubt she is air headee enough to not know their reaction despite being acquaintance of them for centuries. So is she betraying Shirou or is she getting something out of that will benefit both of them and not only herself from this chaos.
Why did sumire informed them tho. I doubt she is air headee enough to not know their reaction despite being acquaintance of them for centuries. So is she betraying Shirou or is she getting something out of that will benefit both of them and not only herself from this chaos.
3/21 c24 Guest
I'm real happy to see this update again. One of my all time favorites. :)
I'm real happy to see this update again. One of my all time favorites. :)
3/22 c10 ColdxCold
End of the chapter was dumb. He can get angry, happy, and worried, but he can’t get horny? Ok bud
End of the chapter was dumb. He can get angry, happy, and worried, but he can’t get horny? Ok bud
3/22 c25 3The Richmaster
It's a shame to see you go but thanks you for sharing so many interesting stories with us.
Best of luck with your next steps.
3The RichmasterIt's a shame to see you go but thanks you for sharing so many interesting stories with us.
Best of luck with your next steps.
3/19 c25 FallenOfAlbaz
Damn, sad to hear that. Good luck with life hope you can inspiration on another site.
Damn, sad to hear that. Good luck with life hope you can inspiration on another site.
3/19 c25 evilstatistic19
Unfortunate but understandable I wish you luck with your future endeavours though I hope you change your mind.
Unfortunate but understandable I wish you luck with your future endeavours though I hope you change your mind.